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[Isimiel]

Wraith attempt 2 

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[TheHappyFace]

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put in a little less detail than usual so what do you guys think?

[Isimiel]

looks nice i like the cobbled together look of it

[Arumac]

Could use some noise added to it, otherwise, pretty darn good.

[Kurzak]

looks great

[Uthilian]

updated version of the kit bash

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[MrDavidoff]

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put in a little less detail than usual so what do you guys think?

Im not sure, if Ill use the right terms in english, but you could try to lighten the colors of those parts of the ship that are on "top" (from top perspective), and darken the lower parts of the ship.
Possible I would recommend adding a very small "bridge" somewhere on the ship. (my choice would be the left top part of the ship, which now has dark red color), but other that that.. I also think
it looks pritty neat.

Good job

Edit- maybe take inspiration from vanilla Auroras engines (I dare to recommend to kit-bash them, since the whole ship is otherwise purely your own work   )

[Vinya]

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put in a little less detail than usual so what do you guys think?

Like the look, but yeah, engines could use some work.

The bow section somewhat annoys me though, I don't see how that would look in 3D.

Also moar shading could help it, but I don't think it would be necessary.

EDIT: The Galactica is looking good. The hull plating could be a bit less pronounced and some more depth shading would do good.

[Amazigh]

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1: I can see some centreline mirroring errors [possibly due to stretching] - can be fixed by taking one half of the ship and flipping it.
2: The line widths are inconsistent [definitely due to stretching] - sadly there is no other way to fix this other than by changing each line by hand.
but overall it's a pretty good looking ship.
One other thing i'd recommend: change the lines to be a variety of very dark greys rather than solid black, IMO it makes BSF ships look much better.

Significantly WIP Capitalship:

[Uthilian]

reworked again, fixed the issue with the errors running BSF in full screen causes it to stretch

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[TheHappyFace]

ithanks for all the feedback!
i think ill go trough eerypart again and detail,shade and clear them up.
the red part is actually fuel and the bridge is the small thing in the back left. x)

edit: modified it following your comments

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@TheHappyFace
hell now look's like 100$  ... BUT all that should be black are gray (look closely at weapon mounts )

@Uthilian
100$ too, now you need to play with the shadow & shade that bastardo down

[sini002]

reworked again, fixed the issue with the errors running BSF in full screen causes it to stretch

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looks pretty cool but might need some shadows/shadeing

[starfigter]

Started messing around with the Battleships Forever ship editor and want some feedback on first ship.
I call it the Thunderbolth.
 

[icepick37]

I like it.

I'd probably make the wing connections skinnier, but that's just me maybe. EDIT: And more angled.