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[ValkyriaL]

Woah, that's a huge change, you really did well with that, but it still needs more welding attention if you want it to be perfect, but thats up to you to decide, it looks decent either way, I'l show you where i mean.
http://imm.io/OYEW

[Sproginator]

Woah, that's a huge change, you really did well with that, but it still needs more welding attention if you want it to be perfect, but thats up to you to decide, it looks decent either way, I'l show you where i mean.
http://imm.io/OYEW

That bottom part was already like that XD

As for the top, it's meant to appear under the main body

[TheHappyFace]

maybe some extra shading to makie it look bettet at those parts

[Sproginator]

maybe some extra shading to makie it look bettet at those parts

Shall get to it in a bit, currently ill

[RutilantSky]

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Not sure if that gives you the idea of what i mean.

I made my own version of the Wyvera (the small one), if you look at the medium center/rear turret, that used to be 2 large ones, but the ship looks like it has always been like this, that's what i mean with welding, you make small details by hand so it looks like the pieces are built together without any "lines" that makes kit bashing apparent, however that was a bad example, as i have failed with shading on the top of those curves.

the the top piece that is the center of a Medusa, add some plating and slowly change the color from the dark blue to light blue so it looks like it belongs there. by the 2 hangars down the middle, try to get the hull appear as angled plating and have it somewhat merge with the black line's shading.

The bottom Medusa, i would just remove it or build out its top sides to merge with the ship hull.

Not sure if this comment shined some light, but in short, you need welding on those Medusa parts and around the middle.

I actually used the bigger ship as a role model for my 'Eclipse' ^^
Also I'm not quite done with it, I need to do more of these suggestions on it, if you look closer, you can make out some copy/ paste pieces.

[TheHappyFace]

little different then my usual approach, but what do you think? (inspired by xenoargh)

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[ValkyriaL]

I don't know, is it finished? seems to lack a bridge, i do like its profile however.

BTW, did you try out the valkyrians? detected anything odd or wrong?

[TheHappyFace]

hmm , a bridge, good idea.

sorry no, havent tested yet.

[FlashFrozen]

Welp, I can say I'm on the road to finishing it, but I would like some help/opinions,

I'm having... err difficulty mounting the 6 large slots on the front end, it just looks... Wrong.

The first and originally planned turret placement is this.

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The alternate which I found less clashy with the stripes is this, but the 2 slots on the lower end are a bit more bunched than I'd like, Any suggestions? 6 slots is a must  

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Oh and, I don't mind finding some more room to add in medium slots
but they may end up as a hidden forward battery... Meep.

Edit: Oh and forgot to mention, BEHOLD, the wrath of the Unsung.

[ValkyriaL]

I really like it, amazing like all the other neutrino ships, how about mounting the turrets like this? to make them less bunched up, or no good? 

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[silentstormpt]

I love it too but also those LARGE turret hardpoints, can you make a flat platform on them like you did to those 6 small turrets near them

and i also agree what valkyriaL said, it would make the firepower more distributed

[FlashFrozen]

I've tried mounting it on the furthest forward, and it rather iffy, how do i say it, it makes the flat turret more obvious against the angled base it's on than ever, and it's kinda squished into there, but here is a quick try at it,

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[ValkyriaL]

I like it, and with those "things" underneath the turret mounts, its like they are on an elevated platform, much like your small mounts, while you can still clearly see that the hull is sloped downwards.

[xenoargh]

@FlashFrozen:  Maybe use a gradient there, suggest a tapering curve into that angle?  Really love the overall design, great old-skool spriting there