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Pelly

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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #1755 on: July 05, 2013, 01:07:03 AM »

Was a side project i was doing (thats my test ship) with a beam weapon with a script plugin - i dont mind sharing the script, its nothing special compared to the chain lighting

Could you either pm me it or send it to me via skype then? (I will then cannibalize it and create a monster), also just looked through the recent sprites done by people here, and wow they look really nice (hint I really like the deadvanced ships)
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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #1756 on: July 05, 2013, 01:17:14 AM »

Try keeping this thread for commenting only.
If you want to ask someone for there sprites or code please use the pm system.
It would be a shame if someone's creation got over-flooded by off topic comments
and therefore didn't receive the comments he had hoped for.
thanks in advance
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HELMUT

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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #1757 on: July 06, 2013, 11:08:40 AM »

As people seems to like those sprites, i decided to finish my "pirating" series of Try tachyon ships. Because why not.


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Edit: and the fixed Apogee.

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Silver Silence

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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #1758 on: July 06, 2013, 11:17:20 AM »


I like~!
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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #1759 on: July 06, 2013, 11:21:53 AM »

As people seems to like those sprites, i decided to finish my "pirating" series of Try tachyon ships. Because why not.


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woo ! i love !
i especially like that you arent dissing the pirated version, just changing the mounts a little so that in theyre own way, theyre still kinda equal
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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #1760 on: July 06, 2013, 01:00:45 PM »

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Terran Federation Ares Class Mobile Infantry Small Transport Ship?
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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #1761 on: July 06, 2013, 01:09:44 PM »

still an WiP


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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #1762 on: July 06, 2013, 03:59:22 PM »

Thanks, i'll may think about making them into an expansion mod for the Pirates. Depending of what Vinya do with them.

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Is that a Starship troopers's ship TGAM? Can we have a top view of it to have an idea of how it looks?

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And for theSONY, very ugly (in a good way). Even though after seeing your ships, i expected the crew to be much more twisted. With a tentacle or two sprouting from the eyes or the nose, a bit of rust and goo on the helmet and it'll look perfect.

Also, will you try to make some "abominified" weapons?
« Last Edit: July 06, 2013, 04:01:01 PM by HELMUT »
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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #1763 on: July 07, 2013, 02:10:41 AM »

@HELMUT
I really like the concept since it really creative.
As for criticism I advice using more colours instead of just brown.
The design is great, just look at some of the pirate ship and try adding some of there colours in it.
For example red stripes and fuel tanks.
In my opinion it would make them look more interesting and less plain, which is a shame with so all the detail you put in them.

Less important but not to be forgotten. I would try out adding some more shading besides what is already on the bashed parts.
It might give them more depth.

@TGAMCallahan
Although I wouldn't know where else to put it I would rather have you not post it in this thread.
This thread is only for Starsector mod art and criticism.
Don't worry I won't blame you since you're new. ;)

@Silver Silence and actually almost everyone
please give some foundation to your comments.
"I like it!" is nice but "I like it because....." is better.  :)

@HELMUT
I know you're really proud of your ships but for the sake of commenting I would like suggesting to keep the amount of ships (with the same style) you post here limited.
Just pick out one or two ships with description and I would be happy to give more precise criticism.
Of course after those are commented on and improved or not you are welcome to post more or the same ones again.

I hope I do not act like a baby sitter too much. I am just trying to keep this thread on tracks.  ;D
« Last Edit: July 07, 2013, 02:23:26 AM by TheHappyFace »
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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #1764 on: July 07, 2013, 02:18:10 AM »

@HELMUT
I really like the concept since it hasn't been done before.
As for criticism I advice using more colours instead of just brown.
The design is great, just look at some of the pirate ship and try adding some of there colours in it.
For example red stripes and fuel tanks.
In my opinion it would make them look more interesting and less plain, which is a shame with so all the detail you put in them.

Less important but not to be forgotten. I would try out adding some more shading besides what is already on the bashed parts.
It might give them more depth.

I also like your design helmut, relly awesome. The only nag i would have is the coloring. IMO it looks a bit plain as Happy mentioned.
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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #1765 on: July 07, 2013, 12:22:53 PM »

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A concept i am working on based on a sketch i found on the internet.
Cant unfortunatly find the source for it anymore.
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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #1766 on: July 07, 2013, 12:58:33 PM »



A concept i am working on based on a sketch i found on the internet.
Cant unfortunatly find the source for it anymore.

will that thing at the top be a built-in weapon ? cause it really look like something for a giant laser of doom
the sprite overall looks pretty cool too
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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #1767 on: July 07, 2013, 01:06:31 PM »

It almost looks upside, like that thing at the top should be a singular massive engine.
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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #1768 on: July 07, 2013, 04:41:28 PM »

I am not sure which side is the front myself ;)
Buuuuut i tend to the engine idea, meh let's see what it's going to be.


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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #1769 on: July 07, 2013, 05:18:56 PM »

I am not sure which side is the front myself ;)
Buuuuut i tend to the engine idea, meh let's see what it's going to be.


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The thing that strikes me the most is the moving mechanical parts. I looks like a floating factory. I've been wanting to do something like that for some time now. I can definitely appreciate the effort put into that ship.
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