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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #5925 on: December 09, 2015, 01:34:32 PM »

Your style works so well with boxy ships, the first one is awesome. Not sure about the pointy head of the other though.
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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #5926 on: December 09, 2015, 01:47:38 PM »

Your style works so well with boxy ships, the first one is awesome. Not sure about the pointy head of the other though.

Yeah that did come out a bit pointy didn't it. I'll fix it.
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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #5927 on: December 09, 2015, 01:56:42 PM »

bruh... that thing looks really nice, you should really add it in the faction and make it more vanilla balanced... It looks way too good to consider calling it lazy lol that ship looks awesome!
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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #5928 on: December 09, 2015, 02:14:42 PM »

Yeah, really liking that first one.
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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #5929 on: December 10, 2015, 03:43:40 AM »

Slowly, slowly, catches the monkey. Shading, etc. is still not there, but progress has been made. Still all in Illustrator, at this point out of bloody-mindedness as much as anything.

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Keep up at this! Or maybe make some tutorial!

Seriously, your ships are one my favourites so far, specially because I like that clean but detailed non-greebly look, and the vector art.

If I was a better artist I would be pumping out ships using Macromedia (not Adobe) Fireworks, vector (with the occasioanl bitmap editing) for the win \o/
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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #5930 on: December 10, 2015, 03:58:58 AM »

I am beginner, so i need opinion.
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the red line is ugly or right?
And, pirate logo is to hide or not? Or correct?


Thank!


PS: Because, before have this design:
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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #5931 on: December 10, 2015, 05:42:28 AM »

I am beginner

Pfffffffffffft

Lies

Even if you are those are amazing
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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #5932 on: December 10, 2015, 05:53:22 AM »

Need an AAAA size battery to get my newly acquired tablet pen to work. Nearly inpossible to find one nearby...

Gonna start creating things from scratch again. And more TM variants.
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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #5933 on: December 10, 2015, 07:08:52 AM »

Snrasha, you shouldn't paint your whole ship in a single colour, some parts can be coloured differently. Weapon mounts, engines, pipes, steel beams and command bridges can be grey/beige. It would looks better than just all shades of green.
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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #5934 on: December 10, 2015, 09:28:29 AM »

A bit more better?
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Yes, i am bad designer, sorry ;'(

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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #5935 on: December 10, 2015, 01:11:34 PM »

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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #5936 on: December 10, 2015, 03:37:05 PM »

I don't see any red lines.
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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #5937 on: December 10, 2015, 03:40:52 PM »

Three reddish transparent lines that go over the hull diagonally.

* Pirate mark is so badly deformed that recognizing any symbol there is hard. Nearly nonexistant contrast of color doesn't help either. Don't need it, I guess.
* Just a note, Vanila pirate ship has red and black paintjob. Might worth seeing them.
* Bridge doesn't stand out. Make it bright gray, to a point that makes its "original color" seem white. Any midline or high-tech ship will be a good example. Don't make any painted mark go over them unless you have a very good reason.

Engine's definately better.
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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #5938 on: December 10, 2015, 04:15:34 PM »

Three reddish transparent lines that go over the hull diagonally.

* Pirate mark is so badly deformed that recognizing any symbol there is hard. Nearly nonexistant contrast of color doesn't help either. Don't need it, I guess.
* Just a note, Vanila pirate ship has red and black paintjob. Might worth seeing them.
* Bridge doesn't stand out. Make it bright gray, to a point that makes its "original color" seem white. Any midline or high-tech ship will be a good example. Don't make any painted mark go over them unless you have a very good reason.

Engine's definately better.
For pirate mark, i have good reason: I prefer as this. (Original picture : ) (More easy for include with a options, ah ah, i am so lazy, but yes, i need more design this.
For compare with vanila pirate, i am just a other pirate faction, so, different color.
For bridge, i have test other color, but with color green, it is very bad. I find. Yes, i need test again.

For example, a other ship of my faction:
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(No, i do need critic for this ship, because i have already all informations.)

Thank all.
« Last Edit: December 10, 2015, 04:21:17 PM by Snrasha »
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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #5939 on: December 10, 2015, 07:51:36 PM »

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Okay so with the dissolution of my old mod I've had to more or less start from scratch, and here's the first mockup of a frigate. Thoughts?

EDIT: This isn't to scale btw, it's about 2-3 times bigger than the actual in game size.

EDIT2: Added a picture to scale, just for those who care

Well, it's about time for an opinion to be held.

For someone who's seen a lot of good looking mods (sometimes done a few playthroughs as well), I quite like the look of this frigate, it'll look great with the purple in the background of space itself

Not much to say otherwise, due to naught experience making sprites, i've yet to get started on some sprites myself.
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