The Ship:
I like the design so far, but I'm not certain how to interpret the heck of the ship. Is the little bird thingy part of it or is there nothing? If its not, it could look a little bit weird, but im not sure right now.
And what is the tube on the left front supposed to be?
Portraits:
Kazi:
I like the male one. Good old Captain beard.
The Female one looks kinda wrong. It looks like she has put on way too much make up to hide her wrinkles.
Ryxsen:
I like all four of them. Personally I don't think that the necks are too long, but I dont think that shorter ones are worse aswell.
On the right ones the shadows seem to be a little bit too dark, we have to see how it appears in the final pictures.
The biggest problems I have, is with the portrait on the bottom left. The shadow seems to be way too large. It is larger than the shadow of the portrait above, where the girl is tilting her head.
Other than that I dont see any problems yet.
Looking forward to the final ones.