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Author Topic: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]  (Read 2222990 times)

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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #1065 on: January 17, 2013, 09:43:09 AM »

No one wants to give me feedback?
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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #1066 on: January 17, 2013, 09:56:45 AM »

One moment please ^^
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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #1067 on: January 17, 2013, 10:04:59 AM »

No one wants to give me feedback?
The shapes are a good start, but the flat colors make the sprites look like paper cut-outs.

Of the three, the Mako Fighter is the best as it has the most details per area, though it too could do with more color depth.
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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #1068 on: January 17, 2013, 10:09:43 AM »

@SpainardSlayer:

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You need stronger contrast with your shading :)
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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #1069 on: January 17, 2013, 10:28:57 AM »

@SpainardSlayer:

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You need stronger contrast with your shading :)

Wow thanks! Can I use that? It definitely looks better
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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #1070 on: January 17, 2013, 10:33:56 AM »

Sure go ahead ^^

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It needs a lot of work of course, maybe it shows you a few basics :)
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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #1071 on: January 17, 2013, 01:11:47 PM »

No one wants to give me feedback?

you might need to learn a bit more about shadeing and giving the sprite a feel of depth so it dosen't look that flat  ;D
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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #1072 on: January 17, 2013, 03:47:42 PM »

Another try at making a new portrait, this time, it's not based at all in existing ingame graphics.
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I decided I'll make a proper faction mod; already spent some time getting the basics of faction building, enough to get a custom faction ingame. This also meant I should do some extra portraits, probably setting for 3 male portraits and 3 female... though I really liked the look of this one, I could go the completely encased look, and have mostly genderless portraits.
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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #1073 on: January 17, 2013, 10:18:07 PM »

Nice portrait, Machine.

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A silicon-based space monster code-named Rock Fly. Once again - the light is coming from left and right + slightly above.

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Not sure if you accept videos here, but i`ll post it in case you do: http://www.okim.nickersonm.com/SF/rockfly.avi (~60mb). It shows this Fly in action (it uses decorative swinging wings and tries to 'bite the void' very excessively).
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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #1074 on: January 17, 2013, 10:24:20 PM »

looks really good, allready downloading the video (yes we accepgt them/ but rather have you set the picture in a spoiler).
it just seems to have more depth than your usual style, which is not a problem.  ;)

the only critic i can think of is about the wings, maybe make them a bit less transparant imo that will look better(opacity or whatever you call it).

edit: dont change anything! just looking at the video.
it looks perfect ^^. too bad i wasnt the first on the forum wo got a beast in-game.
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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #1075 on: January 18, 2013, 12:10:29 AM »

@Okim Dude! Awesome!
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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #1076 on: January 18, 2013, 01:49:35 AM »

A silicon-based space monster code-named Rock Fly. Once again - the light is coming from left and right + slightly above.

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That beast looks gorgeous :)

One of the wings doesn't move properly, though (and a bit faster might be good).
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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #1077 on: January 18, 2013, 02:58:11 AM »

There are 2 starting positions for each wing, so there are pretty large number of animation combinations. What is shown there - is one of the examples when 3 wings start at one angle and the last one in the opposite.

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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #1078 on: January 19, 2013, 09:02:45 AM »

So I decided to try painting digitally... did not turn out tooo well ^^"

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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #1079 on: January 19, 2013, 09:17:18 AM »

Not too bad, Romeo!

I tried making a new frigate:

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It is a carrier, 1 flight deck. 1 small turret (360* arc) small energy mount (left mount) and small missile mount.

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