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ValkyriaL

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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #705 on: December 19, 2012, 04:51:49 PM »

Imagine the armor that thing is going to have...oh my...
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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #706 on: December 19, 2012, 05:33:12 PM »

Asteroid Carrier...holy ***, gimmi one of those! ;D
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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #707 on: December 19, 2012, 07:32:21 PM »

@Maximilian Wow, impressive. If only the music......;)



Early Concept of an asteroid carrier (cruiser class)



the music is from the screen capture software lol not sure where to find royalty free music :]

and your stuff is dang cool! but from the look of it flying it would be more than difficult? don't see any engine...yet :_
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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #708 on: December 19, 2012, 07:36:40 PM »

you can find good music on newgrounds.com for example.
Even on youtube, under advanced search options there is a Creative Commons option

It's a concept, so there is still much to add ;)
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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #709 on: December 19, 2012, 07:52:37 PM »

I did not make the original sprite but I spent 40 minutes cutting it out of the image it was in and working on it to make it usable for the mods. Its an Imperial Lunar-class cruiser.   

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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #710 on: December 19, 2012, 09:35:01 PM »

ongoing WIP of the asteroid carrier

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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #711 on: December 20, 2012, 02:22:27 AM »

Experimental Asteroid Carrier
Ragnarok-class (Cruiser)

still to do:
- some minor touch ups
- adding "ship tattoos"
- minor partial bluring
- minor colour corrections



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Would appreciate some criticism where i could improve.
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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #712 on: December 20, 2012, 03:19:38 AM »

Top right corner, what looks like a landing pad. Try to add some navigational lights or a beacon of some sort, maybe an antenna underneath that specific part or try to make the whole landing pad a little bit lighter. Other then that, which is just my opinion, it looks just great. Good job.
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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #713 on: December 20, 2012, 04:26:27 AM »

Here is the Heavy Siege cannon meant to be mounted on the Vat III, in my opinion it needs a little extra detail.

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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #714 on: December 20, 2012, 04:33:55 AM »

Top right corner, what looks like a landing pad. Try to add some navigational lights or a beacon of some sort, maybe an antenna underneath that specific part or try to make the whole landing pad a little bit lighter. Other then that, which is just my opinion, it looks just great. Good job.
Agreed on all points
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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #715 on: December 20, 2012, 05:31:36 AM »

Archon Cruiser, work done. Criticism appreciated.



Hey Val, great weapon...might darken the outer lines just a little bit and the inner ones...of the barrels. I think there's enough detail already btw.
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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #716 on: December 20, 2012, 05:44:57 AM »

Missing image?
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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #717 on: December 20, 2012, 05:53:59 AM »

Is that better?   ???


And yeah, your image is missing.
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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #718 on: December 20, 2012, 06:08:19 AM »

Should be fixed now. And yes Val, looks a lot better IMHO.
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Re: Spriters judgement thread [non-sprite art allowed]
« Reply #719 on: December 20, 2012, 06:11:39 AM »

Archon Cruiser, work done. Criticism appreciated.


Looks good, except for the blocky hardpoints right at the front, could do with removing the borders of them a bit more, as you have done with the side ones :)
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