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AcaMetis

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Re: The Typo Thread
« Reply #540 on: March 26, 2021, 01:35:55 PM »

Text description for the underworld boss bar encounter: "Some kind of underwork boss lounges in a booth".

EDIT: The old man historian bar event, after selecting him: "In the course of my my studies" and "Retrieving those artifacts is, naturally, your role in our engagement would". I'm also not sure if "a historian-adventurer" is correct or if it should be an historian-adventurer. Or whether both work.

EDIT 2: Old man historian bar event, after choosing the unimportant option is missing a quote...symbol? It's missing a " after "Hah, would you believe that?"
« Last Edit: March 26, 2021, 02:05:00 PM by AcaMetis »
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Re: The Typo Thread
« Reply #541 on: March 26, 2021, 02:06:37 PM »

Missing commas and a missing space.
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Re: The Typo Thread
« Reply #542 on: March 26, 2021, 02:22:46 PM »



Raid mission doesn't seem to like this token replacement
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Re: The Typo Thread
« Reply #543 on: March 26, 2021, 02:31:35 PM »

Descriptive text for the nondescript man in the shadowy booth bar event: "From the shadowy booth a conspicuously nondescript man nursing a drink in a booth catches your eye".
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Re: The Typo Thread
« Reply #544 on: March 26, 2021, 03:00:07 PM »

When taking a bounty for a more challenging target:

"Less convenient is the patrol on guard to ensure they don't leave to soon, so I'll leave it to you to figure out how to get around that little complication."
"to" should be "too"

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Re: The Typo Thread
« Reply #545 on: March 26, 2021, 04:02:37 PM »



Raid mission doesn't seem to like this token replacement



neither does the tac bomb mission  :-[
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Re: The Typo Thread
« Reply #546 on: March 26, 2021, 04:56:33 PM »

Missing "of" in the sentence "Had they seized our assets directly, it would be a clear violation (of) their principle of non-intervention..."

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Re: The Typo Thread
« Reply #547 on: March 26, 2021, 07:27:27 PM »

Fury description has a comma at the end.

https://i.imgur.com/DWFKJwE.png
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Re: The Typo Thread
« Reply #548 on: March 26, 2021, 09:53:08 PM »


One minor typo! Immediately after the tutorial, talk to this guy at the academy. Specifically the scientific object retrieval mission. The description here allows both genders, when the character's gender is already declared at this point. Unlikely to be intended this way.

Seems like everyone visited these guys XD
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Re: The Typo Thread
« Reply #549 on: March 26, 2021, 11:51:00 PM »

The competitor warehouse raid mission seems like it might be missing a description of what your marines actually do in the warehouse once you raid it. If the only line intended is "Your marines set charges" then it's missing a period at the end of that line, before the next sentence of "With the raid completed, your personal [. . .]".

Also, the introduction of the mission where you meet the person in the bar seems like it has "she" typed into the text itself rather than grabbing the character's gender- the rest of the description said "he" and the portrait/name seemed to be male, but the first or second (iirc) sentence had she instead.
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Re: The Typo Thread
« Reply #550 on: March 27, 2021, 02:47:44 AM »

I found a "angry man in an expensive suit" in a TriTac bar, shortly I have the angry man “opening up about her problems”
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Re: The Typo Thread
« Reply #551 on: March 27, 2021, 04:17:10 AM »

In the tutorial, when talking about transponders:

"...unlike that pirate fleet you fought earlier, which you had to be very close to to positively identify." Duplicated word.

For skills, the description for Phase Corps:

"We shall face them with faith that our only redeption is final judgement." Should be redemption.

For Automated Ships:

"Automated ships can only captained by AI cores" should be only be captained.
« Last Edit: March 27, 2021, 04:21:03 AM by Embolism »
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Re: The Typo Thread
« Reply #552 on: March 27, 2021, 07:55:45 AM »

Screenshot here.

Swap "proceeds" for "precedes".
Spelling fix "paramters" to "parameters"
Assuming plurality on garrison, so garrisons.
Missing " marks around "are you in?"

(Moved this here from the bug report forum).
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Re: The Typo Thread
« Reply #553 on: March 27, 2021, 09:06:29 AM »

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Re: The Typo Thread
« Reply #554 on: March 27, 2021, 12:35:58 PM »

Same quest, not really a typo, but picking this option does nothing:

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