Two errors spotted, one of spelling and the other of grammar. Areas affected will be italicized with the names of the sections emphasized in bold.
Ground Defenses
A dispersed, semi-autonomous network of small, hidden weapon installations which makes the prospect of a direct ground assault and even simple raids extremely costly to the attacker. Only overwhelming orbital bombardment or massively disproportionate active screening can supress these defenses.
Fikenhild Secondary Description
The system of Westernesse is traditionally ruled by a popularly elected 'king' whose holding of court - handling of certain primary executive and judicial functions - is broadcast in the local system as entertainment. It is considered essential that the King of Westernesse be wise, just, and above all entertaining. Most potential excesses of the system are constrained by a culture of alternately raucous and sentimental audience participation segments; the King is powerful, yes, but the hearts of the people are mercurial and may be moved to .
Problems to be resolved are: Supress should be changed to suppress, and to should be changed to too.