http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yc2udEpyPpUBasically, you've got a couple apostrophes in possessive adjectives. ;-)
A large energy-class capital ship, capable of long range punishment with its hard point-mounted tachyon lance and its ten auto-pulse laser cannons, Sure to make any opposing capital ship flee for its life. However its lack of many PD defenses and a shallow angled front-mounted shield make it vulnerable to attack from strike craft.
With fixes applied.
"It's/its" homophone errors are one of the only things that triggers the Grammar Nazi in me, in particular because I was doing it for
years and no one corrected me, and then when I finally learned I had been doing it wrong all along I felt like a total ***. ;-)
Looking forward to the mod, in general! I was always a fan of Warning Forever and Battleships Forever, and this seems like it'd fit like a Speedo.