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Stillwel

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Asking for Critiques and Inputs for a mod lore
« on: February 24, 2023, 11:46:03 AM »

Hey ho, i've been thinking of making a mod for starsector and have been making it for this past couple of weeks, uh i've made some lore for the mod and wanted to ask whether or not it would be fitting with the ingame lore. there will be ALOT of grammatical error and broken from what i've written and also some liberties taken from the starsector lore. but any feedback will be appreciated :D since the goal of the mod is to be atleast try to be lore friendly to some capacity LOL xD.

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- 13th Battlegroup got cut off from the gate network as they enact network failure protocol. just like Battlegroup 14, part of the crew is put into cryosleep as all elements of the 13th battlegroup ships operate with a skeletal crew to travel at sublight to the nearest habited volume, in this case the Andromeda Sector.

-during transit a majority of the 13th Battlegroup got caught in a sudden storm launching them off course as all element of the 13th Battlegroup got sucked into a mysterius wormhole.

C+80 13th Battlegroup arrival in the Persean Sector
- the nature of the wormhole is unknown as even the 13th Battlegroup who travelled in it for 80 cycles aren't able to decipher the nature of such wormhole due to the lack of research equipment. however some parts of the 13th battlegroup managed to survive barely. with 90% of the fleet have been either missing or straight up wiped out during the travel, with the survivors starving for any supply.

-after exiting the wormhole the 13th Battlegroup found themselves in the very outskirts of the persean sector. with not enough supply the 13th Battlegroup settle immediately in a volcanic planet to gather up resources to replenish the supply in the colony named Eviliant

C+81 The Great Evacuation
- barely 1 Cycle Eviliant Volcanos starts erupting everywhere as the planet's Geo activity skyrocketed, the colonists who settled in the planet evacuates as fast as possible from the planet. however despite the best effort from the 13th Battlegroup half of the colonists are wiped out as the Planet imploded on itself.

C+82.1 The March
- the 13th Battlegroup after gathering their remaining fleet and any supply that they could get as well as wreckages from the colony. set off to the core worlds.

C+82.10.2 Arrival
- the 13th Battlegroup arrived at the nearest inhabited system called Hirlan, before settling docking with the planet Hibaroasi.

- learning the history of the Persean Sector and the existence of the 14th Battlegroup forming the Polity known as the Hegemony.

C+82.10.22
- the 13th Battlegroup Assisted the Hegemony as the battle over the mayasura system begins. performing rear guard action and long range fire support. the 13th was able to prevent any mayasurian attempt of cutting of supply lines or flanking maneuvers.

- after a victorious Hegemony, the Hegemony awarded the 13the Battlegroup authority over the Mairaath Colony as well as the Hirlan System's Hibaroasi

C+82.11
- an Alliance with the Hegemony known as the "Oath of Battlegroup".

- establishment of Mairaath as the capital of the 13th Battlegroup as symbol of friendship with the Hegemony as well as a guarantee for the people of Mairaath. the Mayasura is directly under the Ilian House, Leader of the 13th Battlegroup as a whole.

- House Teuton,Salaniri, and Olbersta were in charge with the Hirlan system and the development of the Hibaroasi colony.

- the 13th Battlegroup bolster their fleet from recovered ships during the battle of the mayasura system since heavy industrial capabilities are not yet established.

C+83 the First AI War
-the 13th Battlegroup sided with the Hegemony along with the Luddic Church against the Tri-Tachyon Corporation and Persean League.

C+85 Attrition
- during the AI war the 13th Battlegroup has only been able to stay alive through salvaging any sort of ships that are left in battle. being unable to establish any Heavy Industry capabilities, the 13th Battlegroup Fleets begin to slowly deteriorate as pristine ships are slowly replaced with sub par ships filled with permanent D-mods. and with support from the Hegemony being cutoff their number slowly dwindles.

C+90.1.2 Mairaath Fall
-without adequate support the 13th Battlegroup was unable to hold their holdings in Mairaath. with years of constant battles and harassment from the tri-tachyon , persean league, as well as some autonomous AI fleet Mairaath falls as a fleet of Persean league ships were able to defeat the defense fleet during a decisive engagement when the fleet tried to engage the persean league near the sun to leverage their experience fighting with armor against the persean league only to have it backfire as a solar flare engulf most of the fleet, elements of the 13th battlegroup managed to retreat. with the ground elements were ordered to surrender the world to the persean to spare the planet's fate from a second disaster, the persean military thought it was a ploy to ambush any persean marines on the ground and promptly bombarded Mairaath killing any 13th Battlegroup personnel on ground.

C+90.1.3 The Great Retreat
- during the retreat some elements of the Persean Invasion fleet breakoff to pursue the retreating ships. Elda Olbersta lead a rear guard action managing to win a heroic victory against the pursuing Perseans with a 1 to 5 disadvantage. however suffering heavy loses themselves the fleet continue their retreat to the Hirlan system.

C+90.1.4 Hibaroasi Stands
- with the lost of Mairaath Hibaroasi becomes the capital of the 13th Battlegroup

C+95
- the first AI war concluded with a cease-fire. with the 13th Battlegroup's demand of handing over Mairaath refused by both the Hegemony and Persean League, with the Hegemony not wanting to continue the war after losing irreplaceable material

- Hegemony and 13th Battlegroup relation continues to be strained as time goes on.

C+95 - 107 The Great Expansion
-during the full operation to sweep Autonomous AI in the fringe systems. the 13th Battlegroup is tasked with also exploring nearby unknown worlds. during which they wiped out any detected autonomous AI and also begin to settle a couple of suitable world to facilitate expansion of the 13th Battlegroup. the colonization of which are noted as.

-a peculiar planet has been found in a nearby blue star system near Hirlan. the Teuton house of the 13th Battlegroup begins colonization of the planet Tarten on the system now named Teuton. Sargoa the moon of Tarten is also colonized acting as a massive dockyard for the massive influx of material is being shipped for the colonization effort

-colonization of Olberian in a nearby system by the Olbersta House along with Nierpila. with Olberian as a central population Hub and Nierpila as the central mining Operation of the 13th Battlegroup. the system is later named as Olbersta

-colonization of Farialki in a nearby orange star system as well as Porim by the House of Salaniri, Farialki becomes the central farming industry for the 13th Battlegroup .the system is later named as Salaniri.

C+110
- Tarten have been fully colonized. immediately became the forge world of the 13th Battlegroup boasting Heavy Industry unrivaled in the sector due to harnessing of immense Hydro energy due to the planet's peculiarity.

-unlike the hegemony which lost irreplaceable Battlegroup 14 Materiel during the First AI war. the 13th Battlegroup haven't lost any significant 13th Battlegroup materiel as most of the ships that were used during the war was recycled or recovered ships. after the Tarten Colonization the 13th Battlegroup was able to rebuild their fleet quickly.

C+160 Nierpila Hollowed
the unrelenting mining operation of Nierpila led to the entire planet being hollowed out, and soon the 13th Battlegroup's command look to the Persean League worlds to plan for an expansion and especially Mairaath to exact vengeance against the persean league.

C+170 - 175 the Crusade of Mairaath
-with their number bolstered the 13th Battlegroup begins to plan for an offensive to retake Mairaath from the Persean League, with the promises of Aid from the Hegemony the Crusade of Mairaath predicted a swift victory against the persean league within weeks of the war beginning. however after the strike fleet launched, the Hegemony backed out of the planned offensive citing the deteriorating situation in askonia as the main reason why the Hegemony cannot spare any fleet to help the 13th Battlegroup. during transit the 13th Battlegroup strike fleet tasked with the invasion of Mairaath went through a storm effectively cutting off their communication with the 13th Battlegroup High Command, and begins the offensive in the mayasura system unbeknownst that the hegemony backed out of the offensive

-the offensive of mayasura ended in defeat for the 13th Battlegroup Strike force as without the Hegemony support, the persean league fleet was able to repel the strike force and a long protacted war against the persean league begins. with the lost of the initial strike group the 13th Battlegroup's command was in chaos trying to reassemble a defense fleet and with it's defeat the war between the 13th Battlegroup and the Persean league begins.

-During the war (C+171) Tri-Tachyon intelligence deciphered 13th Battlegroup's leaked transmission and was able to locate the majority of the fuel the 13th Battlegroup stockpiled fuel in preparation for the war, this intel was passed to the persean league who promptly raided the stockpile blowing it out ensuring the 13th Battlegroup unable to mount an effective offensive due to the lack of fuel to field any sizeable fleet.

- During the war (C+174) the persean league was able to assemble a large invasion force with aid from the Tri-Tachyon. the  persean league launched an offensive in the Hirlan System. however under the command of Elda Olbersta the 13th Battlegroup manage to manuever against the invasion fleet and engage near the star of the Hirlan system negating the shield advantages that the Tri-Tachyon ships possess and leveraging the Armor that the 13th Battlegroup has. however after the battle the 13th Battlegroup's fleet was struck again by a solar flare burning the "13N Petra" the Command Cruiser in which Elda Commands the defending fleet, killing Elda in the process. the Petra was later recovered. 

C+175 Status Quo
- after 5 years of war, the persean league was unable to break the 13th Battlegroup defences in any meaningful way. and the 13th Battlegroup unable to mount an offensive with the constant attack from the persean league as well as having not enough fuel. both side agrees to a cease fire with the 13th Battlegroup acknowledging Mairaath belonging to the Persean League with the 13th Battlegroup securing the rights to recover and salvage any wreckages during the war.

-this wreckages prove vital for development of 13th Battlegroup Fleet to catch up in terms of technology with the Hegemony as Tri-Tachyon ships and installation have also been recovered which possess superior technology compared with the 13th Battlegroup.

C+175 - 181
-relation between Hegemony and the 13th Battlegroup continues to deteriorate

C+181 - Hegemony Intervention in Askonia
-with the Hegemony fleet the 13th Battlegroup assist the Hegemony fleet by acting as escorts and rear guards. the 13th Battlegroup fleet is being led by the Knightress Leana Teuton.

C+181 - Askonia Crisis
- During the chaos what is thought to be the Hegemony Fleet begins attacking the 13th Battlgroup fleets, engaged in battle with the last transmission coming from Leana Teuton which are "The Hegemony betrayed us".

-with the demands of Mairaath being rejected, the backing out of the Crusade, deterioration of relation, and finally the betrayal at Askonia the 13th Battlegroup High Command Declares war against the Hegemony kicking of the "Great Crusade".

C+182-183 The Great Crusade
- with the war against the 13th Battlegroup the Hegemony was unable to field fleet to oppose Andrada's rule, after establishing the Sindrian Diktat andrada begins to solidify his position and shore up defenses against any possibility of Hegemony  Invasion.

- the initial phase of the crusade see relative success on the 13th Battlegroup side with the hegemony scrambling to assemble fleet to counter the 13th Battlegroup after the formation of the Sindrian Diktat

C+184 - 189 The First Incursion
-however after a string of decisive defeat the Hegemony Gains momentum against 13th Battlegroup as they began recapturing worlds the 13th Battlegroup conquered, and begins an invasion of the 13th Battlegroup's system starting with Hirlan.

- such invasion however was cancelled as both the 13th Battlegroup and the Hegemony agreed to a cease fire.

C+189 - 194 Outbreak of the Second AI war.
- although with bad relation the 13th Battlegroup still highly regard the Domain policy of regulated AI, and because of that the 13th Battlegroup join with the Hegemony and the Luddic church.

- although oppose the persean league, the 13th Battlegroup mostly stay away from the persean league however house Teuton and House Ilian fleets would occasionally engage with the Persean fleets unwilling to forgive the persean as their forces were the one that was stationed in Mairaath before the persean league bombarded them.

-during the war the 13th Battlegroup relatively stay out of combat , disobeying orders from the hegemony most of the time.

C+194 - 198 The Second Incursion
-thinking the Hegemony fleet has been weakened , the 13th Battlegroup declared war again with the Hegemony. however due to experienced officers in the Hegemony, the 13th Battlegroup was pushed out from the core worlds. while the most of the experience officers are from the battle during the first Incursion.

-Fall of Hibaroasi (C+194.5.10) the Hegemony was able to defeat the defense fleet of the Hibaroasi during a decisive engagement  and begins the full scale bombardament of Hibaroasi. any remaining elements of the 13th Battlegroup begins performing rear guard action as they repelled wave after wave of Hegemony strike forces protecting ships performing the great evacuation of Hibaroasi

-Infighting of the Houses(C+194.5.15) with the fall of Hibaroasi the Ilian leadership is called into question, as Salaniri and Tarten house begins to try and break off from the 13th Battlegroup hoping that such action would spare them from the Hegemony.

-the refugee of Hibaroasi tried to settle on Tarten, however seeing how the hegemony is performing saturated bombardament the house of Teuton refused the refugee. fearing civil war might break out the Ilian House and their refugee looked to the nearby Gas Giant for colonization.

-Colonization of Klian(C+194.5.30) the refugee colonized Klian and established it as the new capital of the 13th Battlegroup

-Invasion of the Salaniri System (C+194.8) the Hegemony pushed the 13th Battlegroup back to the Salaniri system. the Salaniri house refused 13th Battlegroup fleet for defense and tried to negotiate with the Hegemony. the negotiation failed and the Hegemony bombarded Farialki to a barren desert world as well as destroying any mining facilities on Porim.

-Establishment of the Flecommande(C+194. 8) with the fall of the Salaniri system, the 13th Battlegroup houses united again and established the Flecommande, the Flecommande assumes supreme authority over all 13th Battlegroup assets.

-Sacrifice of the Olbersta House (C+194. 8) seeing the situation deteriorating the first order of the Flecommande is for Olbersta to conscript the entire population of the Olberian world, willingly the Olbersta house  sacrifice the entirety of the house for the 13th Battlegroup. with the words of Marian Olbersta saying "I had a feeling this would happen... and yet to honor of my mother's wishes, we have prepared for such eventuality Olberian have become a fortress world and with the help of the luddic path we have created a new ship, the terror... kind a ship that not even the Hegemony will expect us to use. this will be the last time I`ll be standing here... so please, make sure that Olbersta's sacrifice not be in vain."

- a deal with the Luddic Path and the militarization of Olberian(C+19?) understanding situation the 13th Battlegroup is in, even since the beginning of the war. the Olbersta house have been preparing for the defense of Olbersta system. Olberian enacted a full conscription, with civilian becoming soldiers overnight willingly or forcefully. massive trenches have been build on Olberian. along the way the Olbersta house strikes a deal with the Luddic path. with no ship to spare, the strategy the Olberstas decided to use was to refit civilian ships into manned warheads.

- Battle for the Olbersta System (C+194.9 - 197.10) with a Ludd prophet onboard the Petra, chanting prayers for the crew and Marian Olbersta. the fleet prepares for the incoming Hegemony fleet and the sin for what they are about to do, as dozens of civilian ships accompany the fleet.

the first battle of Olbersta sees the Hegemony caught off guard, as swarm of civilian ships charged at the Hegemony fleet with support from the military ships of the 13th Battlegroup. these ships explodes the moment they reached hegemony lines wrecking havoc and chaos, after all the civilian ships the 13th Battlegroup fleet retreats replenishing their fleet with even more civilian ships as they continue to do due this over and over.

- Invasion of Olberian (C+195.6-197.10) however with the valiant effort of Marian eventually the fleet is defeated during a decisive invasion, however much of the hegemony's fleet has been eliminated. but with Porim being bombarded to the ground, nevertheless the invasion of Olberian began, and what follows was the bloodiest ground battle both sides have ever since, the invasion immediately devolve into trench warfare as infantry took shelter in the trenches dug up by the Olberian populace. with the hegemony fleet begins bombarding  every 13th Battlegroup ground installation. around this time elements of the Ilian house fleet came to orbit hearing that the invasion of Olberian has begun, however instead of evacuating the survivors Olberian, decided to come into orbit to provide orbital bombardament support for the ground forces. neither fleet wanted to engage with the 13th Battlegroup needing every ships they could muster for the eventual Hegemony reinforcement and the battle of the Teuton system, and the Hegemony fleet crippled during the 1 cycle battle for the system. with the planet rotating the fleets takes turn bombarding the planet to the ground as the once lush terran world slowly but surely turned into a barren world. after the end the hegemony pulled out of the system to regroup, while the Ilian house begins search and rescue operation to find any survivor with the operation only yielding one survivor, Erika Olbersta, daughter of Marian Olbersta and Granddaughter of Elda Olbersta.

- Battle for the Tarten System (C+197.12-198.3) with the time bought by the Olbersta House, the 13th Battlegroup was able to assemble a fleet able to rival the Hegemony Invasion.

- Orbital Engagement of Tarten(198.3) with Tarten at stake, the 13th Battlegroup begins for the battle of Tarten, with Erika Olbersta leading the fleet both fleets began engaging near the moon Sargoa. what follows was a decisive battle, where the 13th Battlegroup fleet was able to wipe out the Hegemony Invasion fleet. the aftermath of the battle sees the 13th battlegroup slaughtering any survivor with the commands from Flecommande to leave no survivors.

- Recapture of Hibaroasi (C+198.4 - 198.5) before it was promptly rebuild as a fortress world inspired by the Olbersta House's actions in Olberian.

Ceasefire C+199 - now
-with bothside occuring heavy losses both Hegemony and 13thBattlegroup agreed to a ceasefire.
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