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Lore, Fan Media & Fiction / Re: Lore submissions for project CAELUS
« on: May 16, 2012, 03:15:40 PM »
Since it didn't seem to get notice before, has it been decided how on many solar systems there are going to be?
Starsector 0.97a is out! (02/02/24); New blog post: Save/Load UI, Autosave, Intel Map Markers, and More (04/10/24)
Hmm... my two cents: increase the contrast a little bit and make the whole thing slightly lighter - ships always look darker in the actual game due I think to some low opacity overlays. Also really add a dark border to the whole thing.Like so?
I like the color scheme of the new part better.
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Above are requested revisions and below is the revised text.
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Sector Date: 14 July, Cycle 108
Starfarer Intelligence
Agent Codename: The Messiah
Faction Analysis: The Sidus Dim
The Sidus Dim faction began as a small company named Sidus Corp under an entrepreneur named Maalf Targoth. Like many other entrepreneurs, he traveled to the new independent Sector-DM58 in 2309. His diligence and hard work on Caligo created a foundation that would allow his company, Sidus Corp, to quickly outgrow the competition in its system. Sadly, this was not achieved in his lifetime.
After many successful years, the Sidus Corp had reached the apex of its power, dominating trade within its system. Due to the Great Collapse, the Starfarers were weakened and their influence throughout the systems was either diminished or entirely lost in some cases. The Sidus Dim, ever a step ahead, saw an opportunity to use their vast resources to seize power. Its leader, a man named Theon Targoth, conceived an ambitious plan to convert his commercial corporations into a military empire. The secret planning and preparations consumed his entire lifetime, leaving the actual execution to his first born son, Rhe Targoth. However, Rhe Targoth had inherited a fate that he did not want. Unwilling to exact such a toll on human life, he was forced into exile by his younger brother, Validus. Validus Targoth seized executive power and set out to create his empire.
Soon after, the Sidus Corp revealed an enormous fleet whose numbers challenged even those of the Starfarers, renaming themselves the Sidus Dim. Using this fleet, the Sidus Dim embarked upon brutal campaigns intent upon sectorial domination. Just a few years into campaign, many planets had fallen to the military might of the Sidus Dim. Feared and hated by almost every faction in the galaxy, their only allies are the Onerar, a mining faction. A threat to the balance of power within the Sector, they remain a daunting problem that remains to be solved.
Kind of the same questions. Are they seeking alliances? Are they allied with the Starfarers? Are they against them? Thank you for making the lore fit in with the state of affairs by the way.
I am also willing to proofread yours to increase clarity and grammatical correctness.
Here you go:If you head over to the lore thread, I wrote a "state of affairs" thing. I think that means that the Starfarers should be the dominating faction as the new peace-keeping force in the Caelan sector.
where is the lore thread?