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Re: The Marenos Crisis (ch.5 2014-10-15)
« Reply #15 on: October 17, 2014, 06:33:13 PM »

The hulk of the Tarsus drifted in the darkness half a light minute from the F3 glow of Algre, lying cold, dead and alone.
I don't want to look nit-picky, but "half a light minute" is a very very short distance from a star! It's roughly 9 millions kilometers, when Mercury orbit in an infernal heat 60 millions kilometers from the sun, and the Earth is a whole 8 light minutes away. So close, the ship would quickly have become a ball of molten metal...

Your writing remind me of "Honor among enemies"  ;D
Keep up the good work!
1) Oops. It was originally half a light minute from a Saturn or Uranus analogue gas giant, but then I moved it to open space relative to the stellar primary and forgot to change the distance. Fixed; it's two light-hours now. Thanks for pointing this out!

2) aaaaaah my plagiarism inspiration has been found out
(Don't panic, citizens! While there are/will be a number of similarities, the characters and overall plot will be notably different. We'll see this very clearly soon-ish.)
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Re: The Marenos Crisis (ch.6 2014-10-18)
« Reply #16 on: October 18, 2014, 02:58:26 AM »

Okay, I bet all the positive feedback I've been getting lately dries up like a prune with this chapter given how contrived this scenario is. But I don't care, I find it funny.

(but if people really do find it ridiculous enough, I'll write it out and figure out something else)

Chapter 6
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Adela Sybitz had always been good at improvising. Most of her associates didn’t see in that way, but few actually argued with the results. She’d already pulled it off once today, and while that had led directly to her current situation, there was nothing that said she couldn’t improvise her way out of it again, as she often did. So, as the Eagle came to dock with her little frigate, she quickly devised her plan.

“Everyone, this is the captain,” her crisp, confident voice came through the ship’s PA system. “We’re about to be boarded by the League Navy. Play nice and don’t start any violence. Don’t worry, I’ll get us out of here soon.”

That done, she opened a compartment under her chair and took a small pendant out. It looked rather silly when she wore it over her skinsuit, and Sequeira and Dragunova both eyed her suspiciously, but they were too busy taking care of their own matters to comment on it.

The Marines coming onto the ship’s cramped bridge didn’t mention it either. Many of them had seen pirates, smugglers, traders and even the occasional naval regular wearing assorted charms and trinkets, and they figured this was just more of the same. Besides, with their prisoners being so cooperative for a change, there was no reason to make a big fuss.

Sybitz and her two officers were quickly cuffed, and escorted quietly across the docking tube into the PLS Valiant.



Captain Artemis Archer was waiting for them in the bay on the other side, flanked by two more marines in power armor. She’d taken off her helmet, revealing her sharp face clearly, and Adela carefully if unobtrusively studied her appearance as the party came to a halt. The League captain had the same basic body profile as her own - medium build, fairly curved - but was several centimeters taller, and her skin was several shades lighter. From her apparent age, Sybitz speculated she was a new-mint promotion, although it didn’t really matter for her purposes.

“Pleased to meet you, Captain,” she said, her voice pleasant as she nodded politely. “I’m Adela Sybitz, skipper of the Armed & Reckless.

Archer didn’t seem particularly impressed by the niceties. “Captain Pham told me everything,” she said firmly. “If you’d done it out of the goodness of your heart, I’d actually have been inclined to offer you amnesty. As it is, I’m afraid I’ll have to try you and your crew as pirates.”

“Actually, I’m a madwoman who kidnaps people for my personal entertainment,” Sybitz said. “The fact that I let my victims go after taking their ships and cargo is entirely incidental.”

“Very funny.” Her glittering eyes were hard now. “Give me one reason why I shouldn’t space you right this instant.”

“Because,” Adela reached up to clasp her pendant, “I’m holding a thermal detonator.”

Five rifles snapped up in an instant, as both Loz and Valentina took a step back from their suddenly nutty captain. Artemis didn’t - quite - do the same, but for a moment there was no hiding the stunned surprise in her expression. “What’s the meaning of this?” she said harshly, anger tinged with a hint of surprise and fear.

“Oh, nothing.” Sybitz shrugged. “Just a twenty-kilogram infernium shaped charge in the spine of my ship, with a remote detonator. If it goes off, it’ll tear a huge hole in your hull that’ll take weeks to repair - and kill all of us here in this docking bay. Oh, and it’s got tamper protection and a dead man’s switch, so there’s no point trying to find and defuse it,” she glanced at the marines aiming at her head and torso, “or shooting me.”

She looked at her companions, then at Archer, and sighed dramatically. “Oh, quit looking at me like that, will you? I don’t actually want to blow myself or anyone else up. I just wanted to get you to listen to me.”

“Explain yourself, then,” Archer snapped, glaring.

“I know what you’re doing here in the Marenos subsector,” Sybitz said calmly. “Lots of pirates terrorizing this part of the sticks lately, so you came here to whack some of them and keep the spacelanes safe in the name of truth, justice and the League way. But you’re having some trouble with it.”

Glare.

“You’re just one ship, and not a very fast or exceptionally powerful one at that. You can only be in one place at a time, leaving the rats free to play in the rest of the subsector. And you’re not strong enough to follow them back to their nests and whack those.

Glare.

“And even when you do catch the bad guys, you’ve still got problems. With one ship, you can only chase one fleeing pirate at a time, and if it’s fast enough you can’t catch it at all. And that’s if they decide to run; some of the bandits around here could give even an Eagle-class trouble.”

“Make your point already,” Archer grated.

“It’s simple,” Adela smiled. “You ought to hire us - me and the Reckless.” A suddenly wide-eyed Archer started to speak, but the pirate drove right over her. “Think about it. You get a local guide who knows the place, and a fast mover that can run down the speedier raiders around here and help you with lots of fancy tactics that require two ships. If nothing else, you have one less pirate in the local circulation. Your Navy writes me a nice big cheque, and I get to feed my people instead of seeing them shoved unceremoniously out the cargo lock.” She cocked her head. “It’s win-win, Captain. What do you say?”

The League officer just stared incredulously at her for a while. “...How much?”

“Three thousand credits up front, two thousand a month plus expenses. Fees for specific tasks to be negotiated separately.” She looked thoughtful for a moment. “Oh, and of course: immunity to prosecution for all actions up to the end of the contract, retroactive.”

“That’s piracy!”

Sybitz just grinned.

Artemis Archer clenched her jaw as her mind raced, trying to come up with a way out of having to make a deal with this… this smug, smooth-talking criminal who was making a fool out of her. But loath as she was to admit it, absolutely nothing came to mind. It was only after counting to twenty that she sighed inwardly and shook herself, resigned to salvaging the best she could out of the situation.

“One thousand, and seven-fifty. And only combat expenses count.”

“Two thousand, and fifteen hundred. My crew have families too, you know.”

“Fifteen hundred, and a thousand, and no drinking on the job.”

“Deal!”

In reality, it took another hour before they came up with a written contract that was agreeable to both parties. But that went smoothly enough as well, and Sybitz enjoyed the way the captain had to pretend not to notice when she started idly fingering her pendant during particularly tense parts of the negotiation. When it was all done, she even offered her hand, and Archer - very reluctantly - took it.



A few weeks from now, everyone would agree that the deal had been good and fair to all parties involved. But in the minutes immediately after it was signed, the only one pleased with it was Adela Sybitz.

“Next time, warn us if you’re going to do something like that,” Loz Sequeira hissed as soon as they were back on the Reckless.

“Oh, relax, will you?” Sybitz waved a hand at a random bulkhead. “You know I didn’t actually load an infernium bomb on the ship.”

“That’s even worse!” Valentina Dragunova screeched. “You know you’re not supposed to make a threat you can’t actually execute!”

“And what’s this about working for the League?” Sequeira scowled. “Forgive me, Skipper, but I didn’t sign up with you to become a tool of the establishment.”

“Whine, whine, whine,” Sybitz said exasperatedly, throwing her arms up in the air. “Look, we went from teetering on the edge of bankruptcy, to nearly being executed for piracy, to having a steady job with good pay. I’d say we came out way ahead in the end. We just have to go along with Captain Archer’s game for a while, help her play whack-a-mole with the competition around here, then everyone parts ways and goes home happy. I’m sure you can put up with that for a few weeks or months.”

The two pirate officers stared resentfully at their captain and senior partner for several fulminating seconds. Finally, Tina said “Fine, you’re the captain,” and left it that - but also refused to speak with her at all beyond the tersest shop talk for two days. Loz was a more naturally easygoing sort, so his sulking only lasted eighteen hours.



The other party wasn’t too happy about it either.

“I can’t believe I fell for that,” Archer moaned, slumped over a table in the officer’s mess.

“It’s not so bad,” Jaitley said in his most reassuring voice. “None of us anticipated Sybitz would pull such a trick, and you handled yourself remarkably well under the circumstances. Besides, she’s right about what we stand to gain from this.”

“Fleet Command is going to bust me down to ensign for this,” she went on, seemingly not hearing a word he said. “They’ll dock my pay for a decade, too. I’ll never command anything bigger than a tug again.”

“I won’t put it in my report if you don’t,” was all Koniecpolski said.

“Mom’s gonna disown me,” Archer whimpered. “Little kids will laugh at me when they pass by on the street. I won’t be able to show my face anywhere with a population over five ever again. I’ll...”
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Re: The Marenos Crisis (ch.6 2014-10-18)
« Reply #17 on: October 18, 2014, 09:31:06 AM »

 I'm not sure what you were worried about. It didn't seem too contrived, just the Sybitz being sneaky. I do love Archers feelings afterwards though. Hilarious!  :D
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Re: The Marenos Crisis (ch.6 2014-10-18)
« Reply #18 on: October 19, 2014, 03:52:33 PM »

Don't seel yourself short, that had me grinning madly, madly I say!
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Re: The Marenos Crisis (ch.6 2014-10-18)
« Reply #19 on: October 19, 2014, 07:51:11 PM »

Don't sell yourself short, that had me grinning madly, madly I say!
Ditto! It was a smart move on her part
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Re: The Marenos Crisis (ch.7 2014-10-26)
« Reply #20 on: October 25, 2014, 10:23:12 PM »

Cameo appearance!

Chapter 7
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The rather run-down docking bay was quiet, plastic pallets scattered about, a Harpoon missile still left on a holding rack with the warhead cover open. The dockworkers were gone, having being bribed or threatened into vacating the premises for a few hours. Such things were quite routine on this particular station given the nature of its clientele, and the staff as a rule weren’t particularly inclined to object to taking a break from the daily grind, so none of them had really complained about the eviction. Now there were just three people here with the frigate - no, six now; the guests had just arrived.

Tomás Ibarra shifted on his feet, trying his best not to look jittery as his new customers walked through the loading door. He brushed some imaginary lint off the front of his shirt and dusted off his slacks, more to calm his nerves than anything else. It wouldn’t do to be seen rubbing his palms together in front of the clients.

Adela Sybitz was looking good as always, he thought wistfully, even in that dull red jumpsuit she was wearing. They’d done business several times before, and he rather regretted the fact that business was all she seemed to be interested in. Or maybe it was because he kept flubbing his pickup lines. Still, she was always a pleasure to have around, and he looked forward to interacting with her again.

Valentina Dragunova, on the other hand… Ibarra suppressed a shudder, and carefully avoided eye contact as she approached. He was convinced that she was just waiting for an opportunity to kill him in as brutal a fashion as possible, especially after the time he lost three hundred credits to her in a pub blackjack game and snuck off without paying. Though he couldn’t tell for sure, he was certain she was currently carrying at least two guns under that pseudoleather jacket of hers, and he was suddenly acutely grateful for the two bodyguards beside him that the Hatchet had provided.

White-coated Loz Sequeira he paid no attention to at all. They had little reason to interact beyond the occasional discussion of some technical aspect of a ship being traded.

“It’s good to see you, Adela,” Ibarra said as she approached, putting on his most winsome smile.

“Good to see you too, Tommy,” she said, shaking his hand. “I suppose this is the Vigilance you wanted to sell?”

“Yep. I took the liberty of adding shielded cargo pods, a capacitor bank attachment, and an expanded missile chamber. With a good crew, this bad boy will outfight any government frigate in half the subsector, and carry all your loot around afterwards.” He beamed. “If you’d like to take a look at the internals?”

She nodded, flashing a quick grin. “Be glad to.”



“...so, as you can see, the reaction wheels more than make up for the sticky maneuvering thrusters,” Ibarra said on the bridge thirty minutes later. “Of course, a fine skipper like yourself would have no trouble even without it, yes?”

“Perhaps.” Sybitz gave him a carefully metered smile, which almost became too big when she saw it have the desired effect on him. “Still, I’d feel better if you showed us some trials against a fighter wing or two.”

“Of course. I just…” he started, when his communicator started buzzing. “Excuse me,” he mumbled, then lifted the device to his head. “What is it, Doug… boarders? Power armor?! You can’t be-”

Even through the comm with its noise dampening system, the flashbang on the other end of the line came as a sharp jab to his ears. He jerked his hand away, flinching, and in his distraction failed to realize his prospective clients were already drawing weapons. His bodyguards were doing the same, but unlike Sybitz and her team, they’d been caught by surprise, and it cost them a valuable split second.

In that split second, Sequeira and Dragunova leveled and fired their electrolasers, sending a few hundred volts arcing through the air into Ibarra’s goons. One went down with ventricular fibrillation, although he would end up staying alive thanks to prompt medical attention. The other was simply paralysed temporarily, but more than long enough for the red-haired pirate gunner to drive the butt of her weapon into his solar plexus and send him slumping to the deck.

By the time he realised anything was even amiss, Tomás’s bodyguards were already down and out, falling without so much as a groan. He started to say something, only to be presented with the muzzle of Sybitz’s mag-pistol, and found himself completely, utterly speechless for the first time in his life.

“Sorry, Tommy,” she said genially, “but you’ve been hanging out with some really bad people. They’ve made my new friends very, very angry, and if you don’t tell them everything you know, they’re not going to protect you from Tina here.”

His eyes darted to Dragunova, who had just finished cuffing her guard, and swallowed at her piercing green gaze. “Good day, Mr. Ibarra,” she said coldly. “Remember that blackjack game?”



Dios, please, I don’t know who’s funding them,” Ibarra whimpered. “I’m just a middleman. I get guns and ships for Holk and the others, they give me credits. I don’t ask where the money comes from.”

They’d moved him to the Vigilance’s cargo hold and put him in a hard plastic chair with his hands cuffed behind the backrest. All the lights had been turned off except for the one directly above him, leaving his interrogators shrouded in shadow - except for Dragunova, whose intimidating visage loomed visibly over him like a mask of death.

“What kind of ships and guns?” Loz Sequeira’s voice was cold behind him.

“Frigates of various kinds,” Ibarra said, trying to keep the tremor out of his voice. “Some destroyers too… stolen or military surplus. A couple of Buffalo Twos, a Sunder, and one of the Condors I had in inventory. Their weapons too, of course. Plus small arms for boarding teams.” He hung his head. “I don’t deal with any of the really large stuff. They have other people for that.”

“Right. How many vessels are we talking about here?”

“Seven frigates, in the past three months. Three destroyers.”

“And you’re one of the small-time dealers,” Artemis Archer put in, leaning on a crate of spare flux capacitors.

“Y-Yes,” he said, nodding frantically. “They’ve been buying up ships like potatoes. The orders came in faster than I could stock them.”

There was silence for a while, and Tomás Ibarra became acutely aware of the cold sweat trickling down his neck and the pounding of his heart in his ears. Then Dragunova seized his jowls, lifting his face to meet hers.

“Listen carefully, Mr. Ibarra,” she whispered. “Those guys back there are the only thing standing between me and a very extensive rearrangement of your internal organs. If you like your body as it is, you better tell them something - anything - you know about your clients’ mysterious sponsors. Do you understand?”

“I swear, I have no idea,” he choked. “I mean, I overheard this guy talking once about some big interstellar corporation paying them off and even sending them some ships, but he was drunk at the time, so-”

“Hold up,” Major Janusz Koniecpolski cut in. “This guy you ‘overheard,’ he wouldn’t happen to have a name, would he?”

The arms dealer exhaled sharply after a few seconds. “Krešimirovic. Dmitar Krešimirovic. He runs the Claws of Adria from out of Thrace, I think. I sold him a Lasher and a couple of autocannons once.” His eyes drifted pleadingly to the source of the voice. “That’s all I know about him, really. Can I go now?”

“Depends,” the Marine answered. “Maybe if you tell us a good way to find him, we’ll ask your girlfriend nicely to leave you alone.”

Ibarra found himself caught in her green eyes again, like a deer in headlights, and tried his best not to wet himself.



“Does Ms. Dragunova always act like that?” Archer asked later in the hallway outside.

“Nah, Tina’s really mellow once you get to know her,” Sybitz said, leaning back against a bulkhead. “She never even really cared about that blackjack game all that much, honestly. That act was just because the job called for screwing with Tommy’s head.”

“I’m surprised. I didn’t expect her to help us so well.”

Adela shrugged. “She wouldn’t, normally as a rule, she doesn’t have the time of day for governments. But she also believes in doing a job well even if she doesn’t like it. That’s one of the reasons I keep her around.” She glanced at the cargo bay they’d just left. “What are we going to do with the prisoners?”

“Well, they aren’t actually guilty of piracy themselves, so we can’t just toss them out the airlock.” Artemis folded her arms. “That said, we’ve talked to the local authorities, and it seems some of them have been really naughty boys. They’re all going to spend some quality penitentiary time, at any rate.”

“What about Tommy? He’s been very helpful to us, and it would be a shame to just toss a nice kid like that in prison.”

Archer tilted her head. “You think we should just let him go?” It was a question, not a barb, but it could have easily been interpreted otherwise.

“Not quite.” Sybitz handed her a piece of paper  - old-fashioned cellulose, not the synthetic substitutes that just about everyone had used pre-Collapse.

“What’s this?”

“Drop him off at this address.” The pirate skipper smiled thinly. “I guarantee you that what his mother will do to him will be worse than any punishment we can think of.”



“It is still not fully resolved, then?”

“I… I am sorry, Your Excellency,” the engineer in the observation room stammered. “We have repaired the fire control as best as we can, but I cannot promise it will not fail again under the stresses of battle.” He bowed. “I will accept whatever punishment you deem fit, on behalf of my men.”

“Hmph,” Manza Holk snorted. “Just take a day or two more to try again, but I have other ships that require attending to as well. I expect that they will be done on schedule.”

“Yes, Your Excellency,” the other man said with audible relief. He walked away, his eyes still on the deck.

Beside Holk, Blanco y Marcos looked down through the thick viewport at the mammoth form of the Doomfist in its docking cradle, skinsuited technicians and their bots scattered around it like so many ants. Repair drones scurried about on the brown hull, as a heavy lifter carefully attached a new missile pod to the upper middle bow. From up this close, few things were as impressive or terrifying as a fully armed Dominator-class cruiser like it, and he could only imagine what mind-numbing terror its victims must have felt staring down the barrels of its guns.

Holk was turning away now, and Blanco followed him. The pirate chieftain took just a moment to dust off his immaculately tailored suit jacket before exiting into the corridor outside, and they walked some distance before stopping at another viewport.

This one offered the sight, close up, of a Gemini freighter/carrier that had just received a repainting. Emblazoned on the side was a black-on-red flag, based on a familiar logo with a twist. The central element was one he had seen many times before: a hatchet, a snake curled around its long, solid handle; but the fourteen five-pointed stars arranged in a ring around it were new. And if he thought  it was pretentious to have all of them there so soon, before their plan had even really kicked off, he made no mention of it.

Further in the distance was a small group of ships, barely more than silhouettes against the blackness of space - several frigates and a destroyer, conducting a training exercise - and all of them had received the same symbol. This was just one of many squadrons they had… and when the time came, all of them would bear a common banner as they executed the will of their master and commander.

“You see, Rigo?” Holk said, an unlit cigar in his hand as he motioned at the scene. “I have often said that opportunities are principally a matter of the strength and will to seize them.” He smiled thinly. “Out there is our strength, and in here we have the will, the likes of which the Sector will learn to respect and fear.”

“It is as you say, my lord,” Blanco answered simply, and their eyes returned to the view of the stars beyond. As he contemplated all their plans, the glorious future that awaited them, he recalled something else he had once heard his master say.

Terrorize the galaxy with one ship, and they will call you a pirate. Terrorize it with a hundred, and they will call you an emperor.



“Please. You’ve got to help me.”

The heavyset mercenary petty officer in the bar examined the back of his hand, paying no obvious attention to the nervous youth at the same table. His corner of the place was quiet, an island of isolation from the bustling conversation, loud music and strobing lights in the middle of the floor… or at least it was until two minutes ago, when this scrawny boy who barely even looked like he was of drinking age had approached him, unsolicited. “And just why would I do that, kid?”

“The government killed hundreds of civilian protesters here on Duval two weeks ago,” the lad whispered, eyes darting about in search for eavesdroppers. The generally omnipresent secret police tended to patrol the areas frequented by foreigners - such as this entertainment venue - more lightly, but it would take only one informant for him to be disappeared permanently. “They say the demonstrators fired first, but it was a put-up job. None of us were even armed with modern weapons - not in Sekos - and they’re inflating the cop deaths while playing down the civilian ones. I’ve got evidence - video footage, photos, eyewitness accounts, a doctor’s report - and I have a journalist friend in Carda. If you can get it to her-”

“I got that part, kid,” the grizzled sailor interrupted, dropping his beer down with a thump. “What I wanted to know is, why should we care?”

The young man flushed with moral outrage for a moment, but bit his tongue and shook himself. The mercenary was his only hope of accomplishing his task, and calling him callous or a sociopath would do nothing to persuade him to lend his assistance. Reluctantly he dipped into the pouch hanging from his belt, pulling out a fistful of credit chits, and dumped them on the plastic surface along with a small data card. “Eight hundred. That’s all I have.”

“Mm.” Eight hundred wasn’t a lot - it’d barely cover the cost of the detour from their planned route - and wouldn’t be worth squat if he got accosted by the Security Directorate on the way out. On the other hand, the Skipper had a bit of a humanitarian streak, and could probably be persuaded to take on this job. Besides, the crew had little more love for the despots of Sekos than the locals did.

He took a gulp while he considered his options, then set the half-empty stein down on the table. “Alright, I’ll talk to the captain. If the answer is no, I’ll come back tomorrow and return your money and the chip. Else, you’ll probably hear about it on the news in two weeks’ time. Good enough enough?”

“Yes.” He nodded jerkily. “Thank you. That’s all I ask.”

“Alright.” The larger man surreptitiously scooped up the hard polymer wafers on the table, putting them in his pocket. “I’m leaving now. Wait at least five minutes before you make your own exit. And...” he gave the closest thing to a smile he could, “watch yourself, kid.”

As he watched the mercenary stand up and walk casually towards the door, the youth made another silent prayer for his lost friend Enrique.



Two days later, the ISS Black Star left Duval orbit and headed outsystem, taking half a gigabyte of various files with it.
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Bonus content: Character renders (test)
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Adela Sybitz


Artemis Archer


(Their hairstyles aren't what exactly I had in mind, but they're close enough)

Assembled and rendered with DAZ 3D, modified images with GIMP
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Re: The Marenos Crisis (ch.7 2014-10-26)
« Reply #21 on: October 28, 2014, 12:58:18 PM »

Mothers are truly scary. Also nice cameo, I enjoyed it. I sort of had a similar image in mind of archer compared to the character rendering. Regardless I liked the chapter!
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Re: The Marenos Crisis (ch.8 2014-11-02)
« Reply #22 on: November 01, 2014, 08:20:02 PM »

Chapter 8
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In the days of the Domain, Mazic Station in the Algre system had been established as a starport with supporting facilities for the planet of the same name below. The original was a standard prefab, modular design routinely deployed on young colony worlds: a broad, stout hexagonal tube, with docking facilities on either end, linked by a space elevator to the surface below. The sides could be fitted with various attachments, or linked to another tube of its kind for a straightforward expansion of the station. Where a less technologically sophisticated civilization might have used a rotating ring or spinning tube to simulate gravity via centripetal force, the Domain’s engineers had incorporated directional gravity projectors in the “lowest” decks along the station’s length.

The station was still there, but it bore increasingly little resemblance to what its designers had in mind, or indeed to any pre-Collapse installation. Numbering in the tens of thousands by the best estimates, the station population was well over the habitat’s listed capacity - for that matter, it was significantly exceeding the ability of the planetary administration to adequately manage - and people were spilling out of the designated residential areas into crude shanties without proper power or sanitation. The gravity generators were increasingly failing, and with little ability to repair or replace them save jury-rigged systems cannibalized from starships or other parts of the station, ever-larger “columns” of the station were deemed unsuitable for the terrestrial-style human residences. These were relegated to serving as storage areas, impromptu youth recreation parks or the occasional gang hideout.

New modules sprung from the station’s surface like blisters, fashioned from local resources to store people and cargo. They were not the tight-fitting autofactory prefabs envisioned by the Domain architects, but crude, ungainly, underfurnished, unsafe blocks manually assembled from smaller pieces. Workers in old-fashioned vac suits swarmed over the new construction projects, moving loads around largely by hand. They were a testament to the resourcefulness of the local citizens, even if any core world building inspector would have condemned them in a heartbeat, and they helped relieved some of the pressure building up in Mazic… but they weren’t quite enough. Nothing was ever quite enough in a place like this.

Still, it wasn’t all doom and gloom, ruin and decay. Some critical parts of the infrastructure were kept well-maintained, like the rail service that ran along the axis of the station. The train which Artemis Archer had just stepped off was packed like a prespace sardine can, but it was also reasonably clean, well-lit, and had only creaked slightly on its high-speed run from the docks. It’d arrived on time, too, which was more than could be said for the metro back home on several occasions.

She sidestepped the people still streaming in and out of the cars, straightened out her skirt, then glanced over her shoulder at the tall, solidly built man following her. He kept a neutral expression, brown eyes carefully avoiding hers, and she felt the corners of her mouth twitch in amusement.

Koniecpolski had pitched three different kinds of fit when he’d found out she wanted to spend some of their shore leave catching some “alone time” on the station. Cabin fever or no cabin fever, there was a price on her head, damn it, and that meant she wasn’t going anywhere off the ship without a fireteam of his Marines watching her back. Which would have defeated the entire purpose, of course. It wasn’t until the major - whose permanent rank was junior to hers by three whole grades - threatened to brig her on her own ship for the duration of their port call that she gave in and let him assign her one bodyguard.

So now Sergeant David Kauffman of Second Squad was following her around all over the place in clothes that wouldn’t have looked out of place on a prespace biker, carefully yet unobtrusively playing the role of watchdog. He hadn’t complained or even said a word when he got assigned to this duty, but it was clear to her that he shared the opinion of his CO, who thought (entirely respectfully, of course) that she was a typical Navy puke who would wander into traffic if he let her.

Stifling a chuckle at the thought, she turned forward again, ready to walk out of the train station… and startled as she came face-to-face with Adela Sybitz. Who, for her part, was just as surprised to see her.

“Fancy meeting you here,” was all Archer could think of to say.

Sybitz didn’t reply immediately, instead looking the older woman up and down. They were both dressed in their civvies, but where her own jumpsuit was strictly utilitarian, Archer wore an elegant yellow cardigan over a white shirt that contrasted nicely with the blue skirt ending just above the knee, slit part way up the middle to allow a greater freedom of movement.

“What?” Artemis asked after a few uncomfortable seconds.

“Oh, nothing. It’s just… you look good. Really good.” Sybitz grinned. “I’m envious, honestly.”

“Let’s keep our conversations to business, please,” Archer said uneasily, holding up a hand.

“Sure, sure. Say, I don’t suppose you’ve eaten yet?” She motioned with her head towards the station entrance behind her. “I know a good place. My treat.”

Unexpected generosity, met with a suspicious glare. “And why would I agree to follow you? Without a bomb pressed against my ship, that is.”

“Harsh, sister, harsh. But to answer your question: because if I don’t help you, you’ll just wind up falling into one of the tourist traps the Mazics keep around here. Or worse,” she shuddered, “the Interstellar House of Gruel.” Arms spread wide now: “Come on, I’m trying to be a nice person. Throw me a bone here.”

“If this is another of your tricks…”

“If it was, and something happened to you, your Marines would tear my ship apart by the molecule. And your XO would take that big, shiny cruiser of yours and slag anyone who even looked like he was running from the station. Besides, you haven’t paid me yet.” Adela tilted her head. “Come on, it’ll be fun and perfectly safe. You can even bring that babysitter of yours; I can tell because he looks like he’s ready to shoot me.” She suppressed a smile at the momentary flash of anger on the man’s face, then met Archer’s eyes again. “What do you say?”

The captain glanced back at Kauffman. He didn’t look very happy about it, but he eventually nodded slowly, and she turned back to the other woman. “Fine. But we’re sticking to the main thoroughfares. I don’t care what you say, I’m not going into a deserted back alley where your goons can jump me.”

“You know,” Sybitz said serenely, turning to walk out of the crowded station, “you’d have more friends if you weren’t such a suspicious sort. Now, let’s go before it gets really crowded.”



The “street” outside (it was really a corridor, but it served the same purpose) was filled with the usual midday throng of people. The shouts of roadside vendors hawking food, drink, clothes and various trinkets, haggling with forever penny-pinching customers, rose distinctly above the din of the bustling crowd.

Sybitz guided Archer and her silent companion through the human thicket, tracing a path down the right-angled roads further into the station’s periphery. The orange-haired officer had seen parts of the station before, but only the more heavily-travelled areas, and as they went along she noted how the thinning crowds seemed more shabbily dressed, how the walkways got dirtier and less well-maintained, with paint actually flaking off in some areas, how the stalls became sparser and less well-stocked… and how there were ever more beggars.

Intellectually, Artemis knew that such poverty was the rule, not the exception, in most of the Sector. But that was a file she had stored in the back of her mind, not something she truly understood, and she was taken aback by the number of people living on what little charity they could obtain others. There’d been no vagrants at all outside the rail station; there was one or two every hundred meters a few blocks away… and this one street had no less than seven.

“Is this normal on Mazic?” she asked. “The beggars, I mean.”

“Of course it is,” Sybitz answered, turning to look at her companion. She hadn’t intended the tinge of bitterness in her voice, but now that it was there she hoped Archer heard it. “What, you think everyone lives like on one of your League’s Five Worlds? With your schools and career opportunities and social safety nets?”

“No,” Archer said in a low voice, shaking her head. “It’s just…”

“Miss, miss,” a young boy’s voice came from below, and the two women turned to look down at a scruffy youth, no older than eight, holding his hands out. “A few credits, please? I need something to eat.”

Sybitz saw his face - and froze, feeling a sharp stab of pain as a sudden series of old, half-forgotten memories flashed through her mind. The boy’s dirty brown face bore only a superficial overall resemblance to that of anyone in her family, but the chestnut-tinted eyes, the timidly hopeful expression, even the ragged T-shirt and worn jeans he wore... they all reminded her of a younger brother. One she’d lost so many cycles ago.

She blinked the mist from her eyes, then shook her head, embarrassingly glad that Archer hadn’t noticed her reaction. The League officer was still looking at him, having pulled her purse out and transferring a couple of credit chits to his cupped hands. “Here you go, kid,” she said, putting on a slight smile. “Don’t spend it all at once.”

“Thanks, miss!” he beamed, clutching the plastic wafers to his chest. Then Sergeant Kauffman tossed him a large silver coin, and he squealed as he caught it in midair with half-full hands.

Archer turned forward again to see the other beggars looking expectantly at her. Taking a deep breath, she produced more credits and and dropped them into their hands as she walked past. With each chit she passed out, she could see the joy on their faces at the tiny act of kindness, the inordinate gratitude in their eyes as they thanked her eagerly, and though she tried her best not to show any outward sign of it, the experience filled her with a deep sense of shame.

“You can’t solve Mazic’s problems by doling out credits on a street corner, you know,” Sybitz whispered in her ear as they continued walking.

“I know. What they need is the tools and the education to build something decent for themselves, and the assurance that someone won’t just come along and take the fruits of their labor away.” She shot her pirate companion a dirty look. “That includes you, by the way.”

A soft sigh, now. “But all the same, I can’t just leave them be, you know? I can’t just turn my back on them without doing something, however small, to ease their troubles a bit. Maybe someday, if I could come back here...”

They exchanged silent looks for a few fleeting moments before Sybitz looked ahead again, pursing her lips. “If you like, we can talk about this at a more comfortable time. Come on, the restaurant’s just around the corner.”
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Re: The Marenos Crisis (ch.8 2014-11-02)
« Reply #23 on: November 01, 2014, 09:04:49 PM »

They come back by that corner and there's twice as many beggars there. :P
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Re: The Marenos Crisis (ch.8 2014-11-02)
« Reply #24 on: November 01, 2014, 09:46:59 PM »

My, but this is coming together really nicely.
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« Reply #25 on: November 02, 2014, 01:31:24 AM »

Hehe Someone has been playing Tyrian!
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« Reply #26 on: November 03, 2014, 06:26:16 AM »

I agree with Mshadowy, it is coming together nicely. I suspect there going to be an assasination attempt in archers future soon.
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Re: The Marenos Crisis (ch.8 2014-11-02)
« Reply #27 on: November 04, 2014, 05:34:05 AM »

I just realized my current plan has too many different scenes stuffed into the last leg of the story, so I went back and added a new scene to Chapter 7 (it's just before the one in the bar).

Hehe Someone has been playing Tyrian!
I'm vaguely tempted to reprint the gnome gruel commercial somewhere in the fic now...
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« Reply #28 on: November 04, 2014, 07:12:51 AM »

Hehe Someone has been playing Tyrian!
I'm vaguely tempted to reprint the gnome gruel commercial somewhere in the fic now...
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« Reply #29 on: November 09, 2014, 05:02:35 PM »

I just realized my current plan has too many different scenes stuffed into the last leg of the story, so I went back and added a new scene to Chapter 7 (it's just before the one in the bar).

The additional scene was enjoyable & interesting despite being quite sinister. Bad Stuff™ is coming, and there's gonna be a heavy price to be paid. I look forward to seeing how this transpires.
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