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The Marenos Crisis (complete: 2015-01-31)
« on: September 30, 2014, 07:08:55 PM »

Hi, and welcome to the thread for my second Starsector fanfic!

This is a loose sequel to A Battle's Lesson, but you don't actually need to read it to follow this story. This will be a more serious work - no feghoot in this one!

Feedback, pointing out mistakes, etc. welcome! (in particular, I'd like to know if anyone finds it disconcerting that the narrative sometimes refer to characters by their surname and sometimes by their given name)

Boilerplate legal disclaimer
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Starsector is the property of Fractal Softworks; its content is reproduced here under fair use laws. All other rights are reserved to the author.
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Content warning
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Swearing, graphic depictions of violence, narrative references to sexual assault
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Bonus: Missions (for Starsector 0.7.2)
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Awesome (old) flag of the Persean League by David, found in Starsector/graphics/factions

The Marenos Crisis - Missions
a.k.a. "Gameplay and Story Segregation: A Case Study"
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Four missions based on the events of this fanfic, plus one about the prequel A Battle's Lesson. See if you can do better than the original characters did.

It is strongly recommended that you read this fic before playing any of its four missions!
If you really want to know how far you have to read before playing, the chapters are:
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Politics the Womb: prequel (but you can actually play it without having read that story at all)
First Encounter: Ch. 2
Enemy Mine: Ch. 5
Counterinvasion: Ch. 15
Last Resort: Ch. 18
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Thanks go to Tartiflette for the wormhole "planet" (taken from Scy under the CC-BY-NC-SA 4.0 license) and Dark.Revenant whose arcade mission provided a handy guide for understanding ship spawning functionality!
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Bonus: recommended music (spoilers!)
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Chapter 2
Chapter 5
Chapter 9
Chapter 15
Chapter 18
Epilogue
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Bonus content: Character renders (test)
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Adela Sybitz


Artemis Archer


(Their hairstyles aren't what exactly I had in mind, but they're close enough)

Assembled and rendered with DAZ 3D, modified images with GIMP
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And now, without further ado, I present:

The Marenos Crisis
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ODT format
EPUB format by Scuttlebutt (out of date, not recommended)
Part 1 (prologue, chapters 1-11) - Google Docs
Part 2 (chapters 12-18, epilogue) - Google Docs

Blurb
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Over two centuries before, the region of space now known to its inhabitants only as the Sector was cut off from the all-encompassing Domain of Man. Thrown back on their own meager resources, the people here have been fighting an uphill struggle with tooth and claw to retain their way of life, or what’s left of it. The great star nations and megacorporations of the Sector vie for supremacy, whether through feat of arms or economic dominance, while pocket-vest empires rise and fall in the depths of independent space. Free planets look constantly over their shoulders, wary of the depredations of pirates and avaricious neighbors, and for many of the common people, the mere fact of survival is a daily miracle.

When the Marenos Subsector is beset by a sudden surge in pirate activity, one of its system governments beseeches the Persean League for aid. Preoccupied with its immediate interests, the League spares but a single cruiser under a newly promoted captain, to do what little it can to stem the tide. But there’s more to these “pirates” than meets the eye, and the threat may well be beyond the ability of one ship to handle.

But no-one told Captain Artemis Archer of the Persean League Navy that. She finds an unlikely ally in the pirate Adela Sybitz, and together they’ll unravel the conspiracy and stop the looming disaster… or die trying.
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Prologue
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ISS Armed & Reckless
Lasher-class
Rondel variant


PLS Valiant
Eagle-class
Guardian variant

The hulk of the Tarsus drifted in the darkness two light-hours from the F3 glow of Algre, lying cold, dead and alone. Though the footsteps and other noises of the impromptu recovery team faintly echoed through the sterile grey decks and bulkheads, there was no longer any air to carry them to the ears of others. The raiders had seen to that, just before they departed.

Despite all she’d seen in her career, it was all Adela Sybitz could do not to shudder as she surveyed the bodies littered about her. Three of them were arranged in an arc around the depressurized cargo hold, their corpses caked with desiccated blood where the mag-bolts had taken savage bites out of their internal organs. They were among the lucky ones, the ones who’d died resisting the boarding attempt. The ones who hadn’t… no, best not to dwell on that.

She walked over to a nearby bulkhead, the slender dark-haired man with the gauss rifle following her quietly. A girl - no more than sixteen - was lying in the corner, a slightly younger boy propped up against the partition nearby, their bodies covered in brown-red splotches and essentially nothing else. Kneeling down, she tilted his chin up, examining his blood-splattered face. His dead eyes looked up, as if gazing at her own teak-colored features, and she soon found herself looking away.

Exhaling sharply, she stood up again, wiping her hands on her skinsuit. “What’d you pull from the logs?” she asked the man behind her.

“Enough to make you sick,” Loz Sequeira muttered. “They hid behind a moon, then jumped the Marigold as she came in through the local hyper point. She surrendered almost immediately, but that didn’t stop them from gutting her with their big guns as they approached. When they found out they’d caused the tanks to rupture and blow out their prize’s engines, well, I guess that’s when they got really mad.”

He looked distastefully at the remains of the crew again. “Good god,” he said, grinding his teeth. “You rob people, fine, you need the credits, fine, but you show some respect. This is just plain barbaric.”

“Swine,” a third person hissed on the comm. That was Valentina Dragunova, now standing up from where she’d been examining the first officer’s body. “It’s pigs like this who give the rest of us pirates a bad name.”

“Welcome to the profession, ladies and gentlemen,”  Sybitz said evenly, even as her mouth worked into a frown. “No accountability beyond that of the gun means that ‘round these parts, every two-bit thug with wet dreams of holding power over others lines up to join up some pirate group or other. And let’s not pretend you or I wouldn’t end up just like them after a year or two surrounded by that kind of pervasive attitude.”

Sequeira looked away glumly, while Dragunova just glared at nothing in particular, jade eyes glittering angrily. Despite herself, Adela felt her lips twitching in amusement.

Before he’d joined her crew, Loz had been a smuggler couriering light, high-value cargo across the Sector. He’d been quite astonished one day to find himself suddenly face-to-face with a pirate Lasher while on a run, and even more so when he found himself flying the damn thing two days later. Not that he had much of a choice, given that in robbing him Sybitz had ruined him financially, and asking (begging, really, although these days Adela only brought that up to rib him in social situations) to be allowed to work for his captors gave him the only chance of evading his last client, his creditors, and starvation (in that order).

Dragunova, on the other hand, had been a career pirate even longer than Sybitz. She’d been awfully reticent about her past when she’d been applying for the open position of weapons officer on the Armed & Reckless, although her rap sheet - she was wanted in at least seven different interstellar polities - was certainly impressive enough. Other than that, the only thing Adela really knew about the red-headed woman was that she liked to shoot things, and that she was really good at it. Which, as it turned out, was just fine with one Captain Adela Sybitz.

“Actually, I’m more concerned about the pirate ships,” Sequeira said after a while. “This tub’s sensors were basically unmaintained to begin with, and whoever did this had some pretty good ECM, so I couldn’t get much from them. The physical evidence on the hull, though...”

“What do you mean?”

He tapped his wristcomp as the women approached him, and the space between them glowed with the volumetric projection of the ISS Marigold. Sybitz’s eyes narrowed as she studied the numerous gaping breaches visible on the schematic, created when someone had repeatedly fired a high-power ship weapon into the Marigold’s defenseless hull, and she wondered what had provoked the pirates into doing something they knew would only cost them.

“The external scans show hits from high-end weapons atypical for pirates,” the ex-smuggler went on, “including several energy weapons. I’m not talking cheap PD lasers, either; there’s a part,” he highlighted a section of hull near the stern, “which shows shearing consistent with a graviton beam. And here, outside the cargo bay, we have…”

“... a direct hit by a heavy blaster,” Valentina put in. “It appears to be what set off the hydrogen.”

“So the pirates are operating late epoch ships,” Sybitz said. “That’s not exactly unheard of.”

“Yes, but the maintenance budget will eat into your profit margins pretty heavily,” Loz pointed out. “You can make up for it by going after higher-value cargos, but we’ve barely seen anything like that in this backwoods subsector, especially given how crowded the competition is getting lately; they ought to be moving to greener pastures by now. For that matter,” he waved an arm at the upturned cargo hold, “pirates with the connections to get ships and weapons like that usually manage to not screw up a simple hijacking like this one.”

“So what are you saying? That they may not be the face-value pirates we’re taking them to be?”

“I don’t know, not yet. But anyone running high-tech ships in this part of the Sector is something to look out for.” He shrugged his narrow shoulders. “I’m going to analyse the comm signal and voiceprint. If we ever happen to talk to them, we’ll be able to identify them. Maybe someone will find some value in that information down the road.”

“If we’re lucky, someone has a nice, big bounty on them,” Dragunova said gruffly. “I need an excuse to shoot something right now.”

“There’ll be time for that, Tina.” Sybitz looked briefly at her two most trusted subordinates and companions, then nodded. “Very well, if there’s nothing else, let’s wrap up here and leave. We need to be finding some prey of our own.”
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Chapter 1
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The first thing Commander Ashok Jaitley, League Navy took note of as he entered the brightly lit room was the nanofiber-bodied arrow slicing through the air with a hiss, followed by a sharp thud as the blunt iron practice head buried itself in the old-fashioned wooden target.

This was normally the recreation deck for the flag officer and his staff on an Eagle-class cruiser, but there wasn’t one right now, the PLS Valiant having been detached on a solo operation. Under the letter of the Regs, that still didn’t mean the woman here was entitled to appropriate it as she’d just done, but he didn’t think it was a good idea to bring that up just this moment.

He watched in silence as she shook her head slightly, the reddish orange ponytail swaying in the air, before drawing the replica composite bow and firing again. The last arrow had struck the edge of the seven ring; this one landed squarely in the eight. None of the shafts sticking from the increasingly pincushion-y board were further out than that, and two had actually hit the nine, but the much-coveted X ring remained unmarked.

It was only after the third arrow was nocked that she turned to face him, and he stiffened slightly at the glare in her cyan eyes. The bow wasn’t - quite - pointed at him, but it was rather closer then he felt comfortable with when it came to sharp objects flying at a hundred meters per second.

“One pun out of your mouth, Jaitley,” Captain Artemis Archer said in a cold soprano, “and this arrow goes right through your sternum.”

He raised his hands in a gesture of peace. “Wouldn’t dream of it.”

She glared at him for a few more moments, then gave a vaguely apologetic half-shrug and started cleaning up. The arrow went back in the carrying case, along with the three still unfired on the table before her. She walked over to the target, retrieving the ones there as well, before putting the bow in the case and sealing it. “So, what did you wish to see me about?”

“Just wanted to take a few minutes to go over the newest data packet with you before the staff meeting,” he said, assuming a parade rest. “I would’ve commed you first, but you left it in your cabin again.”

“And now I know why I did.” She started to groan, but let it out as a small sigh instead. “I suppose it’s too much to hope it includes a message that we’re finally getting those screening elements?”

Jaitley shook his head. “Sorry, Captain. Tensions with the Hegemony are still at elevated levels, and every ship they can spare is being sent to Hancock. Rear Admiral Slater sends his regrets, but also expresses his confidence that you will achieve results despite your lack of resources.”

“Wonderful.” This time she didn’t even have the energy to sigh. Thanks for the vote of confidence, Uncle Bernard, but I’d rather you’d sent me a destroyer squadron instead.

This whole operation was screwed from the beginning, she thought sourly. As far as she was concerned, it was the brainchild of a bunch of paper-shufflers back home who were presented with a problem and wanted to look like they were Doing Something about it without any concern as to whether the problem actually got solved or not.

The premise was simple enough. The Marenos Subsector, never the most secure region of space at the best of times, had recently seen a sudden, unexplained upswing in pirate attacks by new and existing groups, with all the usual economic and social disruptions that entailed. Worse yet, there were even reports of some of the pirates becoming daring enough to even attack the assets of system governments, and demand tribute from them.

A request for assistance had been put in by Carda, an independent system in the subsector currently applying for associate membership in the Persean League (and by a whole lot of corporations based in the League). So, while some poor overworked agent at NavInt got working on figuring out just why there was so much banditry going on all of a sudden to begin with, the Powers That Be had sent a naval force to show the flag and hopefully kill some pirates in the process. A force consisting of exactly one Eagle-class cruiser, Captain Archer commanding.

“What do they expect us to do, fercripesake?!” she half-snarled, even as she cringed inwardly at sounding so petulant. “If they wanted us to cover more than half a system at once, they should have sent a couple of light flotillas. If they wanted us to actually go after the bad guys on their turf, they should have shaken loose a proper task force, or at least a Conquest. Instead, we’re sitting here in our shiny new cruiser, looking all impressive as we swat down a raiding party here and there, while the rest of the pirates just go pick on whoever is unlucky enough to be somewhere we’re not! Ugh.”

He started to say something, but twelve years of naval service - and eight years of married life - had taught him one vital lesson: sometimes, it’s better to avoid arguing with the other person and simply let them burn themselves out. So he just stood there, still at parade rest, until she stopped looking like she wanted to hit something and took a deep breath.

“Sorry, Ash,” she half-mumbled, looking away. “I shouldn’t be taking my frustrations out on you.”

“That’s what XOs are for, ma’am.” He smiled, and she returned it. “Now, if we’ll head to the briefing room?”



“Alright, everyone, listen up,” Archer said, leaning over the table with her palms flat on the surface. “If you’ve been paying any attention at all to the news, you’ll know that the security situation in the Marenos subsector has only degraded in the month since our arrival.”

“As we know all too well, we’re just one ship. We can’t possibly begin to cover every merchant buzzing about in the subsector, and we can’t just fly straight to Vaas and wipe out the pirates in their nest. That said, our duty to the League and the people of Marenos remains, and we will fulfill it to the best of our ability. We will not allow a single more civilian vessel to be robbed, looted or destroyed than is within our power. Are we clear?”

“Yes, ma’am!” the chorus came around the room, and she smiled thinly.

“Good. Now since we can’t chase the pirates all over the place, and we can’t go knocking on their front door, we need to get them to come to us.”

Ashok Jaitley tapped his pad, and the holo-display at the centre of the table lit up with a schematic of the Valiant. She was an imposing figure, loaded for bear yet fully displaying the graceful lethality of her breed, and it was hard not to feel a surge of pride at the sight.

“We’ll configure our ECM to disguise us as an overloaded Phaeton-class tanker,” here a translucent render of the fat, ungainly utility vessel was superimposed onto the cruiser’s, “and we’ll tow a decoy drone behind us to make it look like we have a frigate escort.”

The plot then switched to a starmap, a number of planets highlighted with interconnecting lines. “Of the systems this side of Vaas, Algre is the hardest hit with twelve merchies and two patrol ships lost in just two weeks, so that’s where we headed. We’ll flip our transponder and deploy the decoy just before leaving Carda, then hit Yunan, Secile, Masaila and Ibers on our way. Any pirate gets close enough to see we’re not actually a big, slow tanker with a small escort, we’ll run them down and seize them. I want a few of them captured alive if at all possible, but a dead pirate is infinitely better than one that gets away to terrorize the merchants somewhere else. Any questions?”

Archer sat down and looked around at her officers, surreptitiously observing their behavior. All the ship’s top-level people were here, except comms officer Lieutenant Belle Gray, who had the watch, and Surgeon Commander Harvey Lister, down in sickbay treating a crewmember with second-degree steam burns.

Jaitley was calm as always to her right, idly rubbing his bushy mustache as he studied the plot, and if he was in anyway inclined to point out that she had been just a tad hypocritical with that opening speech, he showed no sign of it. Lieutenant Commander Ross Diamond, was also running his fingers through something - in this case, his messy blond hair - but it wasn’t at all clear that he was paying attention to much of anything. Commander Hanna Battuta, Valiant’s headscarved astrogator, just looked back evenly at her, her forearms resting on the table.

To Archer’s left, Marine Major Janusz Koniecpolski (he was really only a captain, but the courtesy promotion removed any potential ambiguity over the title “Captain”) studied his tablet intently, undoubtedly considering a number of potential tactical scenarios. And finally there was the senior engineer, Lieutenant Commander Rollyn Bracket, nervously tugging at her chestnut brown locks.

“You have something on your mind, Rolls?” Artemis asked gently.

“Ahh,” the engineer startled. “Well, um, it’s the augmented engine system, ma’am. I’m worried about pushing her too hard, if… well, we’re going to be chasing pirates who are trying to run from us.”

“What’s wrong with the engine?” Jaitley cut in, eyebrows raised.

“Well, you see,” Bracket fidgeted, “with all the electronic hardware they were putting in at the same time, they couldn’t get the high-power thrusters to quite fit. So they took off a bit of armor, rerouted some of the hydrogen feeds, and removed two of the four coolant pipes. Which means it could go offline much more easily if it takes a bad hit. But it should be fine if we don’t get shot!” she hastily added as more than one person stared at her. “Um, I think it’d be better if I found a way to make it safer, though. If I set up an emergency vent, add a backup flow system, and-”

“Rolls!” Archer waved her arms. “Look, we don’t need to know the details. Just let us know what you’ve done and what it can do when you’ve finished, alright?”

The junior officer flushed, mumbling an “okay,” and Artemis turned back to the rest of her officers. “Any other comments?”

“I’ve been looking at the local equipment,” Koniecpolski said, setting down the tablet, “and it occurs to me that there are some additional items we could procure to improve the platoon’s odds in a boarding operation. Specifically...”
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Chapter 2
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“ISS Sous-vide, your ship is now mine!” the angry voice snarled on the audio-only comm. “Surrender or be blown into dust!”

“As threats go, I’ve heard better,” Archer idly commented as the PLS Valiant did its best to look like a helpless tanker fleeing for its life. “How long till unmask?”

“Twenty-four minutes, Captain,” Commander Battuta said from her astrogation console. “Assuming our ECM holds, that is.”

“Of course it’ll hold,” Ross Diamond snapped. “You think I’m gonna let a bunch of two-bit pirates outsmart me?”

“Easy, Ross,” Archer said. “Alright, go to general quarters, then let’s let them chase us for a bit. I want them too irritated to think straight for as long as possible.”

The “Sous-vide” and its imaginary escort continued running on travel drive at 225,000 kilometers an hour, ignoring the barrage of increasingly sulfurous threats. The pursuing fleet was gaining slowly but surely, and she watched the plot with steady eyes as the hostile fleet - two Hounds, a Buffalo Mk.II and an Enforcer - crept closer and closer to the critical 10,000 km range at which they would see through the masquerade.

“Coming up on Waypoint Alpha… now.

The Valiant flipped end-over-end, disengaging her towed decoy drone and her ECM disguise, and bored down on her predators-turned-prey at a quarter again her previous speed.

The effect wasn’t truly instantaneous - relativity saw to that - but it may as well have been. Upon seeing that the pitifully outgunned tanker was in fact a naval warship more powerful than all of them put together, they began braking with a thoroughly amazing haste.

“Travel drive inhibitor active,” Battuta reported.

“Begin transmission, Belle,” Archer said, leaning forward and activating the pickup. “Pirate ships, this is Captain Artemis Archer, League Navy. By interstellar admiralty law, I am placing you and your crew under arrest. Stand down your vessels and prepare to be boarded. Resistance will be met with lethal and overwhelming force. If you attempt to flee, or your ships are not powered down within sixty seconds of receiving this message, I will destroy each and every one of you. Clear.”

One of the Hound skippers, perhaps quicker of mind or heel than the others, immediately broke off and ran in a different direction, quickly outpacing the angry shots fired at his traitorous back. The remaining three ships fled together, no doubt cursing even more violently than they had been before the mask dropped.

“That’s right, you scumbags,” Diamond hissed at the tactical plot as the blood red icons of the hostile vessels crept inexorably closer. “Run away; the big bad wolf is coming to get you.”

“Don’t get overconfident, Commander,” Archer said, not taking her eyes off her own screen. Something’s very wrong here. This makes no tactical sense. Pirates have never been known for any great loyalty to each other when things go wrong - the Hound that bolted is proof enough of that! - and yet they’re staying in perfect formation. Even supposing the leader is just holding his assets close, this isn’t the optimal course of action. For starters…

“Why aren’t they scattering?” Ashok Jaitley put her thoughts into words. “For that matter, why isn’t the Buffalo shedding missiles to slow us down?”

“I don’t know,” the tac officer admitted. “Panic reaction, perhaps? They’re not thinking straight?”

“Then they should be breaking and running all over,” Archer pointed out. “These guys look like they’re trying to get away, but they’re not doing a bunch of obvious things towards that goal.”

“It’s a trap,” Jaitley said flatly, and the captain nodded. “Ross,” she looked at him, “I want you to be ready for aggressive action on their part.”

“Okay, but I don't...” Diamond started to answer, then suddenly jerked upright in his seat. “Multiple missile launches! Bandits closing fast!”

“Shields up! Activate point defense!” Archer barked. It wouldn’t be quick enough to stop the first launch if they weren’t already up before she gave the order, but it would deal with the second - if they got far enough for that. “Evasive maneuvers!”

To his credit, Lieutenant Commander Ross Diamond had reacted to the sudden emergence of the threat almost fast enough. Almost.

Nine Harpoons and five Sabots came boring in on a collision course. The PD lasers were still tracking when the first MRM came in, but the shield got up just in time, and the microfusion warhead detonated in a brilliant blue flash barely thirty meters from the Valiant’s hull.

The lasers knocked out three more of the Harpoons, but only one of the Sabots. One more of each missile missed outright as the cruiser’s maneuvering jets kicked in, spinning like a ship half her size in a quick evasive maneuver, and only about two-thirds of the penetrators flung by the remaining SRMs actually contacted the shield. But that was enough, and flux capacitors lit up through the ship like a Christmas tree. Only a quick shutdown prevented the impending overload, and one of the Harpoons actually got through, tearing a nasty chunk out of the Eagle’s bow armor.

And that left the Valiant exposed to the Enforcer’s heavy maulers. Antimatter-doped 140mm shells burst violently against the light grey plating, shattering and fusing the advanced composites, and damage warning alarms wailed on the bridge. And then the Hound was there, spewing hundreds of iron flechettes from its heavy needler, slashing through unprotected bulkheads in a cutting hail.

But now it was her turn.

“Hard to port!” Archer snapped, gripping the armrests of her command chair. “Drivers, target Bandit Three, salvo fire! Beams, engage at will!”

The Valiant banked with the last burst of her emergency maneuvering thrusters, catching the Hound in her sights as it tried to target the weak point in her hull. Four hypervelocity drivers fired as one, their charged tungsten rounds cleaving through the frigate’s thin armor like so much paper, and the ship broke in half as one of its fuel tanks burst.

More Harpoons streaked in, but the tracking systems were ready this time, and the PD turrets stopped them well short of their target. The Eagle reversed course, neatly sidestepping an antimatter bolt from the Buffalo, and rewarded the hapless converted freighter for its efforts with a phase beam carving a gash through its entire starboard.

The Valiant took a moment to shed the excess flux, then charged forward, her shield raised. The HVDs spat fire again, and unlike its newer brethren, an Enforcer’s shield was never made to take such kinetic punishment. It hastily gave way, leaving the armor to absorb the hits, and while the old-style destroyer’s plating was sturdy enough to take the worst of it, it wasn’t quite enough to stop the heavy penetrators and high-energy beams completely. Nor did it do anything against the EM disruption that dazzled the ship’s sensors and fire control systems.

They tried to run now, to scatter as they should have, but this eagle was not about to let her prey escape so easily. She bore down on the Enforcer, melting and hammering its starboard flak cannons to slag before repaying the missile salvo that started the battle with a Harpoon volley of her own. Just four missiles, but with no shields and a half-blind half-maimed point defense to stop them, they struck its bow with a burning fury. Stored missiles and high-explosive ammunition detonated, and the front half of the ship erupted in flame, the crippled wreck spinning away into space.

The Buffalo Mk.II didn’t even merit any missiles. Diamond simply trained his beams on it and burned through the hull until it went up in a bright orange fireball.

A collective sigh went up around the bridge as the Valiant found herself alone in the depths of space again. Archer inhaled sharply, waiting till her fluttering pulse slowed down before she unfastened the restraints on her seat, removed her skinsuit’s helmet and placed it in its harness.

“Damage report,” she said into her comm, trying not to stare at the blood red areas marked on her ship schematic.

“Cargo Bay One is open to space,” the petty officer on the other end stated grimly. “We’ve lost power to the port mainframe, and two of the capacitor banks are a total wipe.” He paused for a moment. “My teams report seven injured, three of them badly, but no-one’s dead, thankfully.”

“Good. I’ll leave you to your work, then. Transmit to my personal if anything serious comes up.”

She cut the connection, then stood up. “Commander Diamond, I’d like a word with you in private,” she said, and the room suddenly took on a distinct chill.

“Um, yes, ma’am,” he said uneasily after only the briefest hesitation, and she turned to her XO. “Ash, you have the watch. Get some S&R on the wreckage.”

“Aye, aye, Captain,” Jaitley answered crisply, and she walked out, her tactical officer - and more than a few stares - following behind.



He shuffled nervously after her as she entered the briefing room, spinning to face him as soon as the door closed behind them. She was gazing right into his dark brown eyes, and he stood perfectly still, trying to stop the sweat trickling down his neck.

“Commander,” her tone was all the scarier for its complete evenness, “what do you think we did wrong today?”

“Captain,” he started, then swallowed. “I… I suppose we underestimated their skill and discipline, ma’am. We got overconfident, and, well…”

She cocked her head. “What you mean to say, Lieutenant Commander, is that we thought we were smarter than them. We got so dazzled by our own brilliance in suckering them into our trap, it never occurred to us that they might not be similarly overawed by it, or that they might be planning the same thing. And because of that, Valiant now has seven crew casualties and a large gash in her port bow that will cost several hundred credits of taxpayer money to repair. Am I correct?”

“Um,” he mumbled weakly. “Yes, ma’am.”

“To be fair to you,” Archer went on, “it’s not entirely your fault. Neither Jaitley nor I spotted the threat much sooner than you did, and we’re both more experienced than you. And as the captain, responsibility ultimately falls on my shoulders. That said, Commander Diamond,” she contemplated his carefully neutral face, “you’re my tactical officer. I need you to be the one to anticipate the threats to my ship, to neutralize them before they do the same to us. And you can’t do that for me if you don’t take the job seriously.”

She paused for a moment, her light blue irises still boring into his soul. She hadn’t asked him a question, so he decided it would be best for him to say nothing.

“Ross,” she said, her face softening, “you’re good at what you do. But so are lots of people out there, and they have a lot of incentive to stay that way, or get even better. Especially in a place like this. Fall into the trap of taking them lightly just because they don’t have shiny ships or fancy uniforms like we do, and you could get yourself and a lot of people - people who are counting on you - killed. Do you understand?”

“Yes, Captain,” he answered, more crisply this time, and she permitted herself a small, brief smile.

“Go down to Engineering and assist Commander Bracket with the repairs. That will be all for today, Commander. Dismissed.”

Diamond saluted smartly, and Archer watched as he turned and left the room, his shoulders drooping with visible relief.
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Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Chapter 16
Chapter 17
Chapter 18
Epilogue
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Re: The Marenos Crisis
« Reply #1 on: September 30, 2014, 07:53:38 PM »

Oh, this is nice.  I'm not exactly the best at lengthy commentary, sorry, but please, do continue.
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Re: The Marenos Crisis
« Reply #2 on: October 01, 2014, 04:40:25 AM »

Can't wait to see a certain Lasher and Eagle team up.
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Re: The Marenos Crisis
« Reply #3 on: October 04, 2014, 02:29:53 AM »

Glad at least some people like it :)

Chapter 3
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The alarms were wailing in the bridge - and all over the ship - but she didn’t have time to pay attention to them any more.

Her vessel was a battered wreck, streaming air from a dozen gaping wounds in her hull, and the Hegemony Onslaught was advancing relentlessly towards it. The broadside Hellbores went to maximum rate of fire, unleashing a cyclone of destruction that would have turned any lesser foe into a shattered wreck, yet not even that terrifying force could stop the juggernaut bearing down on them.

Her hands were shaking, sweat matting her hair to her forehead, as she tried desperately to find the magic bullet that would stop the beast. They were counting on her to save them, to save the ship.

But she just couldn’t do it.

White-hot plasma seared the battlecruiser’s flanks, and then the Onslaught launched four Reaper torpedoes at once straight at it. She stared ashen-faced at the plot, knowing that she could never stop them all. But she had to try. She had to try.

The two burst PD lasers still active were brought to bear, blowing one out of space, then another. Then the third was through her defense coverage, and she had nothing left to parry it with except her shield.

She brought it up, and the weapon’s infernium warhead ignited with a sun’s fury against the barrier. It didn’t so much as scratch the armor… but it did send the ship into overload, abused flux capacitors crackling and sparking violently with barely contained energy.

And it left the PLS Dauntlesscompletely defenseless against the fourth Reaper.

The torpedo’s explosion rocked the ship like a child’s toy, gouged a huge crater in the hull, and sent a hail of lethal fragments larger than a man’s arm through cargo holds, maintenance shafts… and the bridge. One of them speared her console, shattering it and sending sparks flying everywhere, but she herself was miraculously unharmed.

The same could not be said of her colleagues.

The bridge was a smoke-filled abattoir, illuminated only by the dull red emergency lights, the air blowing out in a gust through the breach in the bulkhead. Lieutenant Bell was pinned to the wall by a giant splinter through his sternum, blood caking around the breach in his skinsuit; Commander Harmon had been decapitated outright. Two ratings had been flung across the bridge like rag dolls, and the helm’s seat had been torn in half.

She fell out of her seat, crawling across the bloody deck towards the captain’s chair. Everyone else was dead, but Captain Slater - Uncle Bernard - had to be alive. He had to be!

Pulling herself upright, she gripped his limp body and shook, silently begging him to wake up, to take charge of the situation falling apart around them. But he just laid there, unmoving, heedless of her soundless screams, her eyes fogging with tears.

Then the bulkhead exploded again, and this time it did not miss her.



Artemis Archer awoke with a sudden gasp, shooting bolt upright in her bed. Her heart was pounding in her chest, and she barely even registered the fact that her nightgown and the pillow were both soaked in sweat.

She closed her eyes, willing the nightmares away, trying to get her breathing under control. It seemed to take an eternity, but eventually the visions faded, her hands relaxing their grip on the bedsheets.

It’s alright, AA. They’re not here any more. They can’t hurt you now.

Inhaling sharply, she pulled her knees up and rested her head in her hands. She thought she’d reined in her demons, but being in battle again - even in a relatively “clean” engagement like that one - had brought them surging back to the fore.

One cruiser, out all on its own, commanded by a psychologically damaged captain. They should never have sent the Valiant here, she thought sullenly. They should never have sent me here.

But they had, because they didn’t know. They didn’t know, because one Artemis Archer had done her best to make sure they never found out.

She’d been terrified. Terrified that the Navy would let her go, that she’d be written off as damaged goods. And so, she’d concealed the early warning signs as soon as she recognized them, and somehow managed to keep them from the psych types who’d interviewed her after the battle. By the time it’d reached this level, she’d become a master at hiding the wounds within.

Did anyone suspect? She prayed desperately that none of the Valiant’s crew did. Uncle Bernard might have, but he’d avoided pressing her, and he had his own injuries to cope with at any rate. There were a few others, perhaps, but none of them were here right now.

Which meant she was safe, for now.

She picked up her wristcomp from the nightstand and checked the clock - 3:17 AM, shipboard time - and sighed. No point trying to go back to bed now; she might as well clean up and go relieve Jaitley. Standing up, she shed the now-stained nightie and headed for the shower.



“Captain on the bridge,” Ashok Jaitley announced smoothly as Artemis walked in. “You’re up early today,” he added in a lower voice.

“As you were, everyone,” she said, studying the watch crew. The deck was as clean and brightly lit as ever, and she nodded in approval at the lack of people quietly putting away their book readers or closing computer game windows. “Anything to report, Ash?”

“Absolutely nothing, ma’am. No-one’s even coming near us - or any other tanker, for that matter. I think they’ve caught on to our trick.”

“It was going to happen eventually,” she said. “Especially after that one Hound got away from us.” Her shoulders rose in a slight shrug. “We’ll figure something new out. How long till Masaila?”

“Three days.”

“Alright, we’ll let the crew have some rest then. In the meantime, schedule another staff meeting for tomorrow; we’ll let Hanna have the watch for this one.” She turned to the tac officer’s workstation. “Ross, you finished with those sims?”

“Yeah,” Diamond said, switching his display as the captain walked over. “Some of them were a little too easy compared to what we’ve been facing, so,” he grinned,” I tweaked them a bit. Here, have a look.”

She looked over the scenario details, and let out a low whistle. “Two Dagger wings. The middies and Lieutenant Fong are going to hate you so much.”

“It’ll be good for them, ma’am.” His smile was lopsided now. “And for me, too.”

“Good work, Ross.” She nodded approvingly at him, meeting his smile with one of her own, then turned back to the display. “Though, to keep things fair, I think you should…”



Adela Sybitz sighed, running a hand through her unkempt shoulder-length black hair as she stared at the ridiculous figures on her screen. “Two weeks? Seriously?”

“Two weeks,” Sequeira affirmed. “And with the inflation going on all over the place, there’s no way we can afford to buy any more supplies.” A brief pause, as he glanced at the door. “Ah, I’d avoid talking about that in public if I were you. The crew even get a whiff of the notion that we’re insolvent, they’re gonna desert. Or mutiny.”

I’m gonna mutiny,” Dragunova said grumpily, looking over from her workbench. “I’ve just about run out of 6.72mm ammo, and the holo sight on my K7 is still broken.”

Sybitz placed her hand on her forehead. They’d been running pretty tight as it was when that Eonavia Defence Force’s Monitor had suddenly appeared from behind the Buffalo they were trying to catch. The Armed & Reckless had gotten away, but so had its intended prey, and the repairs to the armor had emptied more of their funds than they’d anticipated. Now they were practically out of credits and supplies alike, and if they couldn’t fix the problem soon...

“Any contract work we could take?” she asked. It was a long shot, but…

Loz shook his head. “Nothing that would pay us enough in time. I’ve been looking, but… the only one that’ll cover our costs is this bounty here. ‘Assassinate League Captain.’ Apparently she’s managed to *** off several of the big pirate bands around here.” He grimaced. “Only problem for us is, she flies around in an Eagle-class cruiser.”

“That does sound like it’s out of our league,” Adela commented, pointedly ignoring Sequeira’s exaggerated groan.

“She has to step off that ship sometime,” Valentina growled. “Give me an SR-X and a good vantage point and I’ll deal with her, clean and efficient.”

Sybitz shook her head. “We don’t even know where she is right now, and we’d have to find out where she’ll be in advance. We don’t have time.” She thought for a while, then glanced again at her gunnery officer. “What about privateering?”

“The only government offering letters of marque around here is the Sekos system,” Dragunova answered. Gruffly: “And I’d rather swallow ground glass than have to deal with those jackbooted thugs.”

“Hey, there’s a wanted ad here by a business called Satin Companion,” Sequeira said, looking up from his tablet. “They’re looking for some young-ish ladies to work temporarily at some event they’re having at the station in Masaila. Maybe we could-”

No.” The sharp response came from both women at once. Unkindly, Sybitz added: “Why don’t you offer yourself up instead? It’s not like there’s any shortage of demand for male sex workers around here.”

“Geez, alright,” the ex-smuggler said defensively, raising his hands. “I’m sorry I even brought it up.”

They glared at him for a while, then Adela sighed again. “Nothing to it. We’ll just have to raise our permitted risk levels. Grab the first convoy we can feasibly take, even if it means our ship gets half beaten into scrap from it.”

“Aye, Skip. I’ll go plot a sweep route now.”

Sybitz leaned back in her chair, closing her eyes. Even “safe” piracy could be a dicey business at the best of times. If they didn’t try her plan, or they tried and came up empty, she could find herself out on the street - or garbage out the airlock. Then again, finding a convoy might be even worse - she might end up pressed into an unwinnable fight and blown unceremoniously out of space. Sometimes it just didn’t pay to be a small-time pirate.

She sat up, distracting herself by going through the ship’s maintenance logs, and tried very hard not to think about Satin Companion.



Under normal circumstances,  a Venture-class cruiser was an impressive thing. Solid as a rock, rugged, well-armed, dependable, especially with a fighter wing or two to back it up. Often, a convoy with one could be trusted to stay safe from the depredations of the pirates so common in the Sector.

But these weren’t normal circumstances, and this particular Venture was no match for the Dominator standing it off, quad Hellbore cannons pounding it into so much scrap metal. Shell after shell slammed into the dying wreck, the hull breaking up into smaller and smaller chunks, and those of its companions who were still trying to put up a fight were swiftly torn apart by the accompanying frigates and destroyers.

“One of the freighters is escaping, my lord,” Rodrigo Blanco y Marcos stated quietly, standing next to the captain’s chair. “Shall we pursue?”

“No need,” the man seated beside him said. He was a tall, slightly tanned figure, with slick black hair, his face marked by a sharp jaw and a scar down the right cheek. Unlike everyone else on the bridge, he was dressed in white tie rather than a skinsuit, an unambiguous statement of his superiority to the mere mortals about him.

“Fear is one of the deadliest weapons in our arsenal, Rigo,” Manza Holk went on. “But it does not spread amongst the dead.” He produced a cigar from his breast pocket, letting the other man light it, and began smoking. “Collect the other ships and dispose of their crew. It’s time we left this system.”

“Yes, my lord. Are we returning to the Cavern?”

“Wait.” Holk removed the cigar from between his lips, tapping on the keyboard of his console with his free hand. “What is the news from our friend Orlov?”

“The last set of weapons was sent out three weeks ago and should arrive by the time we return. The ships… the smaller ones should turn up a few days after, but the cruisers will be delayed another fortnight.”

“Good enough. It’s his account incurring the late fees anyway.” He leaned back in his chair, smiling thinly. “In the meantime, we may as well drop by Algre to discuss the recent delays in their security payments.”

The Doomfist soon turned and left with its escorts and the seized merchantmen, leaving the still-hot wreckage and the bodies of spaced human beings behind in the lonely grave.
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Re: The Marenos Crisis (ch.4 2014-10-06)
« Reply #4 on: October 05, 2014, 09:48:35 PM »

(Too heavy-handed with the depictions of violence, or the villainy? Let me know!)

Chapter 4
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Seventeen-year-old Enrique Arrastía edged towards the front of the crowd, careful not to drop his placard as he was jostled from side to side. Not because he had any particular wish to draw attention to his own sign, which was rather crude compared to some of the others - just “Robber Barons Go Home” squiggled in red paint on white cardboard  - but because he had a youth’s natural curiosity to see what was going on in front of them.

The striking workers had been demonstrating outside the Presidential Palace in Pynchet, the capital city of the planet Duval, by themselves for two days. They were joined by various other groups on the third day, and even the students at the local polytechnic came in within the week. Their grievances were wide-ranging and sometimes contradictory, but most had something to do with Quasar Industries.

Quasar, whose tentacles enveloped the system’s economy. Quasar, whose space station hung in Duval orbit like an all-seeing eye of doom. Quasar, who colluded with the ruling junta of the Sekos system to commit environmental and human rights abuses that would not be tolerated for a second on a Hegemony or League planet. The large, reputable corporations of the core worlds - Tri-Tachyon, Fabrique Orbitale, Neutrino, SHI, and the like - at the very least tried to maintain a veneer of respectability. Here in Marenos, Quasar didn’t even bother with the pretense.

Enrique knew his father would be furious if he knew his son was out here at the front of the protest. Not because he had any love for the planet’s despots - Felipe Arrastía utterly detested them - but because he feared for his family’s well-being. Even with all the simmering resentment boiling under Sekos’s orderly surface, a public demonstration on the streets was unheard of, underscoring just how much anger the junta and its corporate ally had managed to induce. This was the most outspoken the people could get short of a full-scale riot, and the military was unlikely to take the challenge lying down.

But Enrique didn’t care. He was filled with the brashness and righteousness of youth, and squirming his way to the leading edge of the crowd, he waved his placard and chanted the slogans with the people standing shoulder-to-shoulder alongside him.



Thirty meters away, Colonel Christos Zorbas frowned as he watched the protest from the 13th floor of the Cloudmist Hotel. Not because he disapproved of the protesters - although he felt nothing but unmitigated contempt for them - but because he felt his current task was completely, utterly pointless.

We should just shoot the uppity pigs and be done with it, he thought. This rigmarole for foreign consumption is a complete waste of time. It’s not like anyone pays attention to what happens out here in this middle-of-nowhere star system anyway!

But General Naseer had given him his orders, and so it was up to him to carry them out. He raised his old-fashioned optical binoculars to his eyes, and watched the crowd wash up against the curtain of riot police like a wave against the cliffs. Some of the cops were already swinging their batons, knocking back the people in front of them, and a few of the demonstrators were retaliating with fists, stones, makeshift clubs and other assorted implements. Good. That much was going to plan.

He swiveled to the south, safe in the knowledge that the sun was too high for him to accidentally glimpse it at this angle. His team should have been on the balcony of the Parliament Tower around now… there.

“Alpha in position,” the voice came in on his earpiece.

“Acknowledged,” he picked up his comm and spoke, keeping his eyes on the black-clad Special Intervention Unit personnel setting up. “Stand by for other teams.”

“Beta in position.”

“Gamma in position.”

“Affirmative.” A thin smile formed on Zorbas’s face for just a moment, then it was gone. “All teams, execute.”



The three snipers fired in a staggered pattern, with half a second between one shot and the next. Each custom-built rifle threw a four-millimeter uranium capsule downrange with a muzzle velocity of over five kilometers a second, and the projectiles’ density and speed ensured that wind and gravity would have minimal effects on their placement.

It wouldn’t really have mattered even if they’d missed their chosen targets. The people down there were packed tightly enough that someone was bound to get hit and go down in a very bloody fashion, and any kind of bloodshed would suffice for the purpose.

But in any case, they didn’t miss.

Three shots zipped along the Presidential Boulevard, leaving loud supersonic cracks in their wake, and punched through the helmets, skulls and brains of three Duval Planetary Police officers like so much tissue paper.



The “reaction” came instantly.

A score of high-powered mag-rifles opened up, spraying indiscriminately into the gathered crowd. Even with the standard ferrous alloy rounds they were using, these weapons could punch through a marine’s power armor at close range if they hit the right spots. What they did to the unarmored protesters gathered here today was unspeakable.

Bullets cleaved through bodies in twos and threes, most of those hit dying before they could even scream. But enough of them did, as did the ones splattered by the fountains of blood, and for a moment the crowd went silent, stunned as an ox struck between the eyes. Then the ones at the front turned, shrieking, trying to run, but blocked by those behind them. In those few seconds, more rows of demonstrators went down like wheat cut down by a giant, invisible sickle, the streets running red with the slaughter.

The crowd as a whole was starting to flee now, a collective wail of terror filling the air. Too many of them slipped and fell, trampled under by their fellows, crushed into a paste of bone and flesh. Few of the ones still upright gave a thought for them; they were too busy trying to save themselves, fleeing from the sudden horror that had swept over them.

It was then that the plasma lance fired, enveloping fifty people at once in a scorching burst of fusion-powered heat.

By the time the dust settled, Enrique Arrastía was just one of four hundred and seventy-two mangled, charred bodies on the asphalt of Pynchet’s largest thoroughfare.



“...I trust the matter has been resolved to your satisfaction.” the message read.

Kenneth Skilleton turned off the recording and leaned back in his expensive office chair, and only the various portraits and statues adorning his luxuriously furnished office saw his immensely satisfied expression. Indeed it has, Jenna, indeed it has.

General Manager Lain had followed her instructions to the letter (however distasteful she might or might not have found them personally), and the rulers of Sekos had in turn followed theirs in exchange for the small inducement of some new small arms and surveillance gear. The strike before the last had gone on for three months, and had ultimately been broken up with “only” three fatalities; this one lasted for only a week, and the decisive manner in which it had been crushed was certain to give the rabble pause before they even thought of second-guessing their masters again, much less rebelling in this manner.

The only drawback was that operations would be briefly disrupted while they found new workers to replace all the dead ones, but that wasn’t any kind of long-term problem. It wasn’t like there weren’t plenty more where they came from, after all.

To be sure, if the Board (especially that sanctimonious prick Swanson) found out about this, they might get all upset about it, even demand an official investigation. But he saw no reason to bother them with the details, which weren’t part of the corporation’s official records anyway. As long as he kept the profits coming in, they didn’t much care about what went on in the day-to-day operations. That was what they had a CEO for, after all.

And even if they were to look into it, who could possibly contradict his version of events? It wasn’t as if Sekos had a free press or anything of the sort.

Of course, they might care more about that other project he had going on in Marenos, if only because it involved a more direct, large-scale use of company funds. But he’d cooked the books quite carefully, so the chance of detection was remote, and the same risk-mitigating factors applied to this one. As long as he could keep everything nice and clean for the board, he could keep on doing this forever and continue persuading them to increment his own salary in the process.

Speaking of that project, he had a few messages to write. But first, his last success probably merited a little time off. He extended an arm towards the comm on his fine hardwood desk and pressed the talk button.

“Carla, could you come in here for a moment?”
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Re: The Marenos Crisis (ch.4 2014-10-06)
« Reply #5 on: October 05, 2014, 10:10:18 PM »

I like the incorporation (pun!) of certain mod factions. Keep going! This is a great and, most significantly, a human perspective in the sector we all play in.
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Re: The Marenos Crisis (ch.4 2014-10-06)
« Reply #6 on: October 06, 2014, 10:58:56 PM »

 Some of the characterization reminds me of Elizabeth Moon's work.  Keep it coming :)

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Re: The Marenos Crisis (ch.5 2014-10-15)
« Reply #7 on: October 15, 2014, 09:18:52 AM »

I like the incorporation (pun!) of certain mod factions. Keep going! This is a great and, most significantly, a human perspective in the sector we all play in.
Some of the characterization reminds me of Elizabeth Moon's work.  Keep it coming :)
Heh, thanks!

Never actually read any Moon myself, in fact I can't name a single one of her titles >_< Only "modern" SFF authors I have any particular familiarity with are Weber (my primary inspiration for this story) and Flint.
(I really ought to stop being lazy and go look for more stuff)

Anyway:

Chapter 5
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“This is a ridiculous exercise,” Archer muttered.

The PLS Valiant was in the Ibers system, doing her best to imitate one of the captured asteroids that made up part of the ring around the gas giant Calpe. Which was no mean feat, seeing as how a large warship with a running reactor and maintained at room temperature for the benefit of her crew emitted much, much more heat than an asteroid sitting in space 1.5 AUs from its K3 primary.

To circumvent the problem, the cruiser had found a suitably large real asteroid to hide behind while she deployed remote sensors to keep an eye on what was happening on the other side of it (not much, at the moment). The asteroid also doubled as a convenient heat sink. Of course, it’d only work for so long before someone noticed why this particular space rock was noticeably warmer than the others around it, so the Valiant would have to shift to another one every several hours. And if someone happened to be looking in that direction while she did this…

Grumble grumble awful idea grumble grumble how did I let myself get talked into this grumble grumble.

“Oh, quit fidgeting, will you, Captain?” Rollyn Bracket said. Which was rather more undiplomatic - insubordinate, even - than what Archer had expected from the usually meek junior officer, but Bracket was clearly one of those engineers who got their hackles up when some mere “shooter” (or anyone else, really) dared criticize their elaborate designs. “Nothing’s gonna happen! Relax.”

“Exactly!” Artemis jabbed a finger at the main display. “Nothing’s happening. We’re sitting here in the middle of nowhere, twiddling our thumbs while waiting for the pirates to come to us. And even if something did happen, we wouldn’t see it anyway. Our dinky little sensors would be lucky to spot a nuke going off a hundred meters in front of them.”

“Don’t call them ‘dinky little sensors,’” Bracket said peevishly. “You’ll hurt their feelings.”

Archer stared at the younger woman, but could detect no trace of irony in her expression. Then she exhaled, shaking her head. “Sorry, Rolls. I’m just tired. Tired and frustrated.” Easing her expression back to neutrality, she turned back to the plot. “Very well, Commander. You have the watch. Hopefully we’ll come across something interesting today.”

“Aye, aye, ma’am,” the engineer said formally. “I have the-”

“Drive signature!” Lieutenant Fong barked from the assistant tac officer’s workstation. “Range 130,000 klicks, bearing zero-zero-three by zero-five-one!”



As it turned out, another ship had also been hiding in the asteroid ring. This one had a much easier time of it, seeing how much smaller it was.

“A Mule,” Loz Sequeira said in a low voice. “Are you sure this is a good idea, Captain?”

“We don’t have much of a choice.” A grim-faced Adela Sybitz eyed the 3D display of the ISS Carronade. “We’ve only got a week left of supplies, and there’s no guarantee we’ll come across another ship in that time.” Smiling thinly: “Besides, we’ve got a good team here. I think we shouldn’t have a problem taking on one lone Mule.”

“Just let me at ‘er,” Valentina Dragunova growled. “I’ll send his cheap hull to the breakers in ten seconds flat.”

“Not yet. Merchant skippers are always jittery coming into a place like this, because they know someone is likely to ambush them. Lots of rocks to hide behind, and the gas giant’s radiation screwing up their sensors.” Sybitz drummed her fingers on the armrest. “On the flip side, once he knows it’s safe, he’ll let his guard down and we’ll rush him then.”

“And we want to make it as hard as possible for him to duck under the cover of the hydrogen station’s guns,” Sequeira added thoughtfully.

Dragunova scowled. “Fine, but he better not take too long. I hate waiting.”



It took only thirty minutes, in the event. The Carronade docked and got filled up, and its skipper took a moment to do some quick trading with the station’s proprietor. Soon enough, it was pulling away from the station, ambling at a leisurely 200,000 kilometers per hour.

“Coming up at ambush point in three...” Sequeira counted off, “two… one…”

The moment came, and the Lasher-class frigate shot out of Calpe’s ring like a bat out of hell. She bore down on the Mule at maximum speed, guns primed and hot, and targeting radar and lidar locked up the freighter with deadly precision.

“ISS Carronade, this is the Armed & Reckless,” Sybitz spoke into the audio pickup. “Halt your ship relative to Calpe and prepare to be boarded. Cooperate, and you will not be harmed.”

The freighter’s response to the challenge was simple, and largely expected: it bolted straight for the nearby hyper point, not even bothering to send a reply. “He’s not making it easy for us, is he?” Loz muttered to no-one in particular.

“No matter,” Adela said, leaning forward in her seat. “He can’t avoid action no matter what he does, and he knows it. We’ll just run him down and… persuade him to see things our way.”

“And if he thinks he can beat us in a fight,” Dragunova bared her teeth, “we show him the error of his ways.”

At such a close starting range and with the Reckless’s huge speed advantage, it took no more than three minutes to bring the armed freighter into weapons range. Two more orders to the Carronade to come to a halt and accept boarding had been met with stony silence, and Sybitz waited with a cold detachment for her prey to give up the futile attempt to run and start fighting back.

The Mule came banking hard to starboard, its maneuvering jets lighting up as it brought its main weapons to bear. But where the PLS Valiant had been taken by surprise with a similar maneuver, the ISS Armed & Reckless had long anticipated her target’s movements, and reacted accordingly.

The frigate’s shield came up, and Sequeira took the small vessel charging through the four Salamander missiles the larger ship had thrown at her. One went down to a short, sharp burst from the chin-mounted dual LMG, and two more were similarly swept out of space with remarkably accurate Vulcan fire. The fourth one swept around to the rear and came burning in for the disabling engine hit, but the Lasher sidestepped it with grace and punched it out with another quick volley.

She turned around again and closed in swiftly, the shield stopping the pulse laser bolts she could not evade, further missile throws handled with the same efficient combination of fleet-footed maneuvering and lethally accurate point defense. Her machine gun pelted the Mule’s own shield, straining its flux capacitors, and the moment the barrier went down the armor beneath it was pocked and cratered with a series of HE shells from the light assault guns.

“Surrender, damn you,” Sybitz muttered. “I don’t want to have to rip a huge gash out your side with a rocket volley.”

Now under five kilometers from her target, the frigate maneuvered straight for the freighter’s rear, away from the pulse lasers and towards the vulnerable engines, ready to incapacitate her prey…

“Hyper footprint!” Dragunova’s head snapped up from her console. “Range one point three hundred thousand kilometers!”

“Uh oh,” Sybitz said simply, bringing up the newcomers on her own plot. “Looks like two frigates and a destroyer. Still getting jump distortion.” The comm console started chirping, and she hit the receive button.

The image that appeared on the main display was concealed in shadow by artful use of CGI. It did look vaguely male, but that too could have been the work of the masking software. “Frigate skipper, this is Adze One of the Black Hatchet,” a deep, distorted baritone came through the speaker. “This freighter is ours. Leave or be destroyed.”

The Hatchet? Holk’s group?

Adela Sybitz leaned forward, keeping her suddenly clenched fists out of view, and looked straight into the visual pickup. “Your freighter, you say? Sorry, I don’t see your name on it anywhere.”

“We do not have time for your games,” the voice came again in liquid helium. “We will deal with the Carronade. Your continued interference will not be tolerated. There will be no further warnings.”

The screen went blank.

Sybitz gritted her teeth. Pirates, as a rule, weren’t a group known for their trustworthiness, but they did have their own codes of honor - and poaching someone else’s kill went against every single one of them. Did Holk think he could throw the rules out the airlock, just because his was the biggest pirate fleet in the subsector?

“Skipper,” Loz suddenly said sharply, looking back over his shoulder at her. “The comm profile - it matches the people who attacked the Marigold.

“Damn.” She looked over at Dragunova. “Tina, can we identify the new ships yet?”

“Analyzing now,” the gunner replied, fingers pounding the keyboard. “Looks like a Hammerhead, a Cerberus, and… a Tempest?! Are you freakin’ *** me?!”

“We’ve got to withdraw,” Sequeira hissed. “We can’t take on them.”

“And then what?” Dragunova said testily. “If we don’t get that cargo, we lose the ship. And probably our lives, too. I’d rather go out with a bang, if it’s all the same to you.”

“Wait.” Sybitz held up a hand, as two pairs of eyes swiveled to stare at her. “I… I might have an idea.”

She brought up the comm system, and after several seconds of pinging, another face appeared on the display. This one was of a thick-jowled, heavily bearded merchant captain, the sweat on his forehead belying his efforts to appear stoic and stalwart in the face of a mortal threat. “What do you want?!” he asked testily.

“Listen, buddy,” Sybitz said, looking him straight in the eye. “You see those other pirates up there, by the hyper point?”

“Yeah…?”

“Well, it turns out I know these people.” Her lips drew back in what only a shark would have considered a smile. “If they get their hands on you, they’ll *** you and all your crew - they aren’t picky about gender, by the way - then they’ll mutilate you for kicks, shoot you in the head, and dump your bodies into space when they’re done. Me, I’ll just take your ship and your cargo; I’ll even drop you off at the nearest station with enough credits to get home.”

“W-Why are you telling me all this?”

“Here’s the deal. Neither of us can fight them alone, but if we work together we might be able to force them to back off at least. I get your ship and everything it’s carrying, you get to live to see your families again.” She smiled again, somewhat less menacingly this time. Somewhat. “How about it?”

He stared at her, wiping a raised brow. “And why should I trust you?”

“You shouldn’t. But if you don’t, I’m out of here - and my ship runs lots faster than yours. Which is also what I’ll do if you try to double-cross me, just so you know.” She glanced briefly at the tactical display. “You’re in a pit here, captain. You’ve got nothing to lose - except, in two minutes, your life. I suggest you decide quickly.”

“Alright, alright,” he said unhappily. “But if this is some sort of trick-”

“Yadda, yadda, yadda,” Sybitz snapped. “Just hurry up and get back into the ring; we need the asteroids for cover.”

This, at least, was accomplished quickly, the Mule turning with remarkable alacrity back towards where it had come from. Its unexpected escort followed it into the dense rock cover, the Black Hatchet hot on their heels.

“You’re nuts, Skipper,” Sequeira muttered as he guided the Reckless in a weaving path around a particularly dense clump of asteroids.

“Sometimes you gotta be nuts to survive,” Sybitz answered. “Got a read on their weapons, Tina?”

“Looks like a graviton beam, heavy blaster and Harpoons on the Tempest,” Dragunova said, studying her display intently. “Mauler, railgun and LMGs on the Cerberus. Hammerhead’s carrying sabots, PD lasers and a pair of assault chainguns.” She paused. “Looks like they’re fanning out. Trying to hem us in with the frigates while their destroyer moves in for the kill.”

Adela nodded. “Clever. But it also opens them to a defeat in detail.” She studied her plot for a few seconds, finger tracing a path through the rocks to her chosen foe. “Loz, flank the Cerberus and get us into knife range. When that happens, Tina, I want it mission-killed on the spot. Understood?”

“Roger,” the two pirates answered as one, and Adela Sybitz smiled. In a moment like this, they were not the three heads of a motley, ragtag crew, often disagreeable, seemingly always bickering over something or other. They were one, a finely honed blade with a singular purpose, ready to slide deep between the enemy’s ribs.

Two vectors converged, and the Reckless lunged forward as the Cerberus turned to confront her, opening fire with its deadly bow guns. A mauler round shattered a meteoroid not twenty meters away from the Lasher, and the railgun’s iron-tungsten shells crackled as they struck her shield, but the agile frigate was now zipping in and out of the rocks, declining to present a clear target to her larger foe.

The Hatchet vessel tried to do the same, maneuvering amidst the clutter while continuing to track its target. But it was slower, less agile, and its helmsman was nowhere near as good as Loz Sequeira was. Few people in the Sector were… which was cold comfort when the Reckless made a final turn and came to within a hundred and thirteen meters, seven o’clock low from her target.

In open space, and with a sufficiently alert helm, the Cerberus could have simply run. A single burn drive, taking it swiftly far away from the foe flanking it, giving it room to turn around and engage from a position of parity once more. But this was no open space - it was the ring of a gas giant, and a particularly rocky one to boot. There was nowhere to run… and nowhere to hide.

Dragunova squeezed the trigger, and a volley of Annihilators surged forward in a blaze of fury as the light assault guns went to maximum rate of fire. With no shield to interdict them, the low-caliber shells battered and pummelled the heavy frigate’s armor, and then the rockets struck home.

The chain of explosions, and the rain of HE shells that followed it, gutted the Cerberus. Crewmen dead and alive alike spilled from ruptured compartments belching atmosphere into space, while power circuits flickered and died. The ship was still alive - technically - but it was no longer in any condition to fight, and Sybitz’s grey eyes gleamed as the broken hulk spun away from her.

“One down, two to go,” she said. “Now where’s our friend Mr. Tempest?”

“There-”

The shield came up just in time - barely - and the energetic bolt from the heavy blaster vanished in a brilliant sparkle of light. The Reckless dove for the cover of another asteroid, the blue stream of a graviton beam slashing at her… and found her port aft Vulcan cannon suddenly blown out by a few energy hits from the awaiting Terminator drone. Hissing, Dragunova brought the other point defense turret around, spitting fire at the diminutive attacker… and cursed as the 20mm shells sailed harmlessly through their target, the drone slipping smoothly into p-space where no weapon could reach it.

More blaster bolts hammered at their makeshift ablative armor, fragments of rock pelting the Lasher’s hull, as her foe’s automated companion chipped her plating further. She dove deeper into the ring, zig-zagging wildly to avoid presenting her vulnerable aft to her foe, the hunter and his falcon continuing to nip at her heels.

“No good,” Sequeira said. “He’s too quick for us to sneak up on him like we did to the other guy, and if he lands just one or two good hits on us with that blaster we’re dead meat. And if we don’t close, he’ll just catch us between himself and his little friend and give us the fatal thousand cuts.”

“Regroup with the Carronade,” Sybitz ordered. “Let’s see how much he much he likes the other guy having a friend of her own.” And ours is bigger than his.

Pursuer and pursuee took off, both ships pushing their thrusters to the limit. As they turned an arc through a clearing in the rocks, the Mule appeared from behind the particularly large asteroid - practically a tiny moon - where it had taken cover. Its gunners were decent for a freighter’s crew, if not particularly adept, and the Tempest suddenly found itself forced to jink wildly as pulse bolts flashed on its shield.

The pirate crew were competent enough, but they were also in many ways analogous to bullies, unused to fighting with odds that favoured their opponent rather than them, and it showed. Distracted once by their new opponent, they were caught off guard a second time when the Reckless wheeled around and charged, guns blazing.

A hastily fired blaster bolt went clear of the Lasher, serving only to strain the high-tech ship’s flux capacitors, and even as it got off another shot (hitting the shield this time), a burst of machine gun fire pushed it into overload. Behind the bullets came the explosive shells, carving wounds into the thin armor, as the panicked pirate skipper turned his ship frantically away in an effort to evade. The Reckless gave chase, sprinting after the fleeing Tempest even as its drone moved to cover its escape, fresh lasers from behind knocking one of the  low-tech frigate’s verniers into emergency shutdown.

Of course, because Adela Sybitz had spent a decade plying her trade in the sector, she was only mildly surprised (in hindsight, at least) when the other shoe chose that moment to drop.

The Hammerhead abruptly made its own appearance, having finally closed into attack range, heralding its entry with a volley of Sabot SRMs. The Carronade’s defense officer, inexperienced in the ways of ship-to-ship combat, instinctively raised the shield before he realized what exactly was coming at them, and before he could lower it again the shotgun-like hail of uranium penetrators had sent a powerful surge through the Mule’s flux conduits, shorting out most of its systems… and leaving it defenseless against the 25mm explosive rounds shredding its armor.

“Get us behind that destroyer,” Sybitz said grimly. “We need to take some of the heat off the Carronade.”

“Negative,” Sequeira said. “If we do that, we open our six to that Tempest and his heavy blaster.” He grimaced. “It’s all we can do to keep track of his movements as it is.”

“Ugh.” She felt her fingers curling up into fists again, staring at the tactical display with hard eyes. And here he comes again...

The console beeped loudly, and she jerked upright in her chair, her back ramrod-straight as another contact suddenly appeared on her screen. My god! That’s a cruiser-

None of the combatants had spotted the newcomer approaching. They were too preoccupied with their own battle, and there was too much clutter to see very well anyway, especially with their sensors half-blinded by the charged particles swirling in Calpe’s magnetosphere. The cruiser, too, found its vision clouded, but its more powerful detectors could pick up the telltale indicators of ships at max thrust and firing high-energy weapons easily enough, and it only needed to follow these signs.

Now it was here, and it took decisive advantage of the element of surprise it enjoyed.

Four penetrator rods smashed into the Tempest’s belly from below and aft, cleaving everything in their path - fuel feeds, shield emitters, power conduits - and shorting out just about anything that wasn’t. Its flight controls disabled, the crippled frigate careened past the Armed & Reckless and crashed at full speed into an iron-nickel asteroid. The slender bow caved in as the ship buried itself halfway into the surface, crushing countless critical systems; the mangled wreck was now basically useless to anyone except a spare parts dealer.

At the same time the kinetic projectiles had left their barrels, six Harpoon missiles shot out from wingtip racks, headed straight for the Hammerhead’s exposed aft. The point defense lasers stopped two; the other four all struck a circle no more than a meter wide on the destroyer’s spine, blasting a deep cavity in hull and armor alike. Into this gap shone a phase beam, searing straight into the ship’s fusion chamber, and Adze One exploded with the fury of a miniature sun as its reactor went up.

On the compact bridge of the Armed & Reckless, three people stared at their displays in deathly silence. The cruiser - the computers had identified it positively as an Eagle, now - hadn’t killed them yet, but the lidar locking them up and the beam turrets trained on them made it clear that it could do so very quickly if it wanted to.

“It’s the PLS Valiant,” Dragunova said in an uncharacteristic near-whisper, “... and it’s hailing us.”

“There’s always a bigger fish,” Sybitz murmured.

“Why is this always happening to me?” Sequeira whined.
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Re: The Marenos Crisis (ch.5 2014-10-15)
« Reply #8 on: October 15, 2014, 07:20:52 PM »

GODDESS DAMN I love your work! Felt like I was on the bridge of the ships or watching it from an invisible "observer" ship! *** Awesome!
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Re: The Marenos Crisis (ch.5 2014-10-15)
« Reply #9 on: October 15, 2014, 08:21:38 PM »

Ah, that made me smile.  Very nice work!
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Re: The Marenos Crisis (ch.5 2014-10-15)
« Reply #10 on: October 15, 2014, 09:14:37 PM »

I'll admit, the moment I read “There’s always a bigger fish,” I cracked up. Great new chapter to the story! I can't wait for the next one. :D
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Re: The Marenos Crisis (ch.5 2014-10-15)
« Reply #11 on: October 16, 2014, 01:11:01 AM »

it's entertaining and the characters are believable and relatable. It's impressive work, and you've certainly got me wanting more!
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Re: The Marenos Crisis (ch.5 2014-10-15)
« Reply #12 on: October 16, 2014, 03:19:33 PM »

Such immersive writing is commendable; esp. given the state of typical fanfic (regardless of whatever game it's based upon). I can hardly wait for chapter 6! You've got my attention.
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Re: The Marenos Crisis (ch.5 2014-10-15)
« Reply #13 on: October 17, 2014, 06:45:19 AM »

Awesome battle! Keep it up!
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« Reply #14 on: October 17, 2014, 05:29:10 PM »

The hulk of the Tarsus drifted in the darkness half a light minute from the F3 glow of Algre, lying cold, dead and alone.
I don't want to look nit-picky, but "half a light minute" is a very very short distance from a star! It's roughly 9 millions kilometers, when Mercury orbit in an infernal heat 60 millions kilometers from the sun, and the Earth is a whole 8 light minutes away. So close, the ship would quickly have become a ball of molten metal...

Your writing remind me of "Honor among enemies"  ;D
Keep up the good work!
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