Alecto
Last paragraph "
However the doctrine ...
but ..." either 'However' and 'therefore'/'so' or get rid of the 'However'.
Lealaps
Last paragraph "... point, Lealaps
e frigates ...".
Stymphalian Bird
3rd paragraph "... other
pretend that ..." um. I don't think that's the right word. 'contend' maybe? "... been
severely denied ..." 'categorically'? 'repeatedly'? Or even 'been refuted'.
Tisiphone
2nd paragraph "... the cargo hold has been omitted as the fuel cell storage ..." is it supposed to be 'as
has the fuel cell storage'? Or, 'the cargo hold and fuel cell storage have been omitted'.
"... the crew has to wear
s ...".
Hydra
1st paragraph "During its pirate time, ..." um. Something doesn't flow here, 'During its pirating times' maybe?
"... bring back, the Scyan ..." 'so the Scyan' probably.
"... that
is capable ..." 'was'?
Lamia [Armored]
2nd paragraph " ... added
although rather lightweight is ..." I would enclose 'although rather lightweight' in parentheses or hyphens, and maybe swap to 'albeit'. Or even 'The (admittedly/rather/albeit lightweight) protection added is enough'.
"... engine so much that would prevent it from pursuing ..." 'engine enough to prevent'.
Orthus
1st paragraph: "... any retribution these ships ..." add a comma after 'retribution' I think.
Khalkutauroi
1st paragraph: "... It even has the nasty reputation to kill the crew even before breaching the hull, ..." 'The weapon can reputedly kill a ship's crew without the need of a hull breach,' maybe.
2nd paragraph: "... can be
destroyer ..." 'destroyed'
3rd paragraph: "For these
s reasons ..."
Manticore Carrrier
2nd paragraph: "Beyond
that modification, the ..." 'these modifications' seems more appropriate.
Siren
3rd paragraph: "... large engine. So other ..." 'engine, so'
" ... Especially [...] transpired." 'A Siren is capable of capturing a high-ranking officer, together with their ship, without leaving [a] trace of what transpired.'
Keto
2nd paragraph: "... able
to accelerate heavy ..." 'of accelerating'
" ... plasma bolt charged ..." 'bolt's'
3rd paragraph: "... is that with all this equipment already fitted to the hull that there is not many conventional weapon mounts." 'with all this equipment already fitted to the hull, there is little space left for conventional weapon mounts'
Nemean Lion
3rd paragraph: ".
And secondly" Get rid of the 'and', you never start a sentence with 'and'
Outpost
2nd paragraph: "... placed
it there ..." 'them' I think?