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MindsEye

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First Ship
« on: March 09, 2013, 08:35:32 AM »
So my first ship art. Been wanting to add to the star wars mod. Its suppose to be a tie advance. What do you guys think?

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Re: First Ship
« Reply #1 on: March 09, 2013, 11:40:50 AM »
Quote from: MindsEye on March 09, 2013, 08:35:32 AM
So my first ship art. Been wanting to add to the star wars mod. Its suppose to be a tie advance. What do you guys think?

its really nice for a first try, it sure is better than MY first ship (gasp in horror)
i totally get why it look that way, but i feel like the wings look weird the way they are now tho.

still, MUCH nicer than my first attempt
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Re: First Ship
« Reply #2 on: March 09, 2013, 01:40:09 PM »
Quote from: MindsEye on March 09, 2013, 08:35:32 AM
So my first ship art. Been wanting to add to the star wars mod. Its suppose to be a tie advance. What do you guys think?
sorry man I forgot to post on here, as phyrex said the wings look off, try making them less close to the pod, and make them stick out a bit more, otherwise beueno!
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Re: First Ship
« Reply #3 on: March 10, 2013, 04:15:24 AM »
i like the ship ,but what bothers me is that i cant figure out what shape it has.
try adding more shading and keeping your designs simple for ships this size (if it isnt allready simple).

ps. I try to comment on all sprites posted here; http://fractalsoftworks.com/forum/index.php?topic=4264.1320
It might also be interresting for you to see what others got commented at.
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Re: First Ship
« Reply #4 on: March 10, 2013, 04:47:39 AM »
looks like starwars figher. not bad
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Re: First Ship
« Reply #5 on: March 10, 2013, 05:53:49 AM »
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Re: First Ship
« Reply #6 on: March 10, 2013, 06:22:15 AM »
Wasnt expecting such good feedback first time thanks guys  ;D. Ill see if I can mess around with the shading a bit.I guess your looking for lighter edges.Ill play around with wings too.I picked vaders tie so it doesnt look like a standard advance.

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Re: First Ship
« Reply #7 on: March 10, 2013, 10:22:56 AM »
Revised.

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Re: First Ship
« Reply #8 on: March 10, 2013, 10:31:12 AM »
It is better, I still think that the wings need to be a bit wider (around 1-2 pixels?) so that the slope is more apparent.
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Re: First Ship
« Reply #9 on: March 10, 2013, 12:17:57 PM »
Looks good.

I'd recommend using imgur or another image hosting site to post the ship sprite, that way we can see it while replying. Y'all can just copy the Image URL and stick it in an image tag.

Lol, much better than my first ships.
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Re: First Ship
« Reply #10 on: March 11, 2013, 03:00:11 PM »
Latest version  . Think I got it?

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Re: First Ship
« Reply #11 on: March 11, 2013, 03:13:30 PM »
Quote from: MindsEye on March 11, 2013, 03:00:11 PM
Latest version  http://imgur.com/d1Q5Yi4 . Not sure how to use imgur?

when  you post, theres a button under the I for italic writing, it looks like a little painting. click that and put the imgur link between the brackets created. that'll shpw your picture
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Re: First Ship
« Reply #12 on: March 11, 2013, 03:14:48 PM »
to use images either click the images button and post the link inside,, or type:

[img*]http://link[/img]  don't put the star in, its so you can see it


Use the imgur link it says for bbm or forums as that has the IMG part anyway, though the link you gave us isn't right here...

EDIT: Went to the link, you click on the picture for the links ect I wen to the actual image page, therefore :

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