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[HELMUT]

Eh, i'm glad you're back Makina, i was sad when i wasn't seeing your overgreebled ships on the thread anymore!

For this one, the ship seems a bit too flat. Not too shocking on the rear but much more on the front. I like the central bridge though.

[DestinyPlayer]

Added some more stuff to this ship.

[Ultimatum]

So, here is a ship that I have been working on for a little while. I had a previous version, but it was made with a smaller color selection, so I remade it as shown. Any critique? I'm not sure if it should have more greebling, but I am getting the feeling that that might be a nice touch. It may be hard to do, however, considering the way I styled the ship.

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[mendonca]

Ultimatum: I think the Magnorock would benefit from some additional work on the form, in that the light and shade should be stronger. Try picking a light source (slightly in front would be typical, against the general vanilla style) and building up some highlights / lowlights to try and make the shape pop a little more.

[Makina]

Here we are, Wirlpool so had the right in its cure of... greebling ? In any case, it changed.

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And I tried to improve Magellanic Clouds to make it a little less flat. I am not sure of the result.

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[HELMUT]

I'm a bit surprised by the flat "stain" at the front of the ship, here:



Still, much better than the previous one.

For the Wirlpool (or whirlpool?), the Atlas containers looks a bit weird compared to your usual style. Not very shocking though.

Ultimatum, as Mendonca said, it's more about shading than greebling for this one. I think it would also greatly benefit from animated lights and stuffs.

DestinyPlayer, i really like the smooth armor on the rear/sides but not too much the bridge and the two guns. The engine parts looks a bit flat too. I think your ship would look much better if you try the curvy aesthetic for the whole hull rather than just the armor.

[mendonca]

More PACK tweaks:





De-noising the Shar-pei, and adding some form to the BRT ... think they are much improved, still see some areas to work on.

(really need to add some dec-weapon sparks 'tween the forks of the shar-pei ...)

[xenoargh]

Great job bringing more depth to those, they look great

Oh, and... I always wanted to fly one of these...

Glaug Annihilator for scale comparision

[Ryxsen1421]

Great job bringing more depth to those, they look great

Oh, and... I always wanted to fly one of these...

Glaug Annihilator for scale comparision

Yamato 2199's alien battlecruiser?!!

[ValkyriaL]

You mean this?

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[xenoargh]

Yamato 2199's alien battlecruiser?!!

It's even older than that.  The Spirit of Gamilon was designed way, way back, in 1978.  When I was a kid, I built a model of this ship; not knowing much about anime then, I presumed it was a hero ship (which, in its way, it is; the design's so iconic that it's showed up in about as many movies as the Yamato I has).  So, to me, it's  a hero ship  

About the only feature I don't think I can replicate without major issues are the "guided lasers" of the Yamato series, but tbh, I always thought they were silly-looking anyhow.

Not sure what I'll do with it; the design's unique-enough that I'll probably create some sort of mercenary / bounty-hunter faction that hunts down players occasionally, and use this thing as one of their flagships

[HELMUT]

Buffaloes!

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Yeah those red variants are quite a bunch of ugly mofos, a face only a mom could love.



Speaking of mom...

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I really wasn't satisfied with those capital variants, that's why i only made the Monster and the Yak (not really satisfied with this one, will very likely rework it) and didn't bothered with the green and yellow variants.

[Nanao-kun]

Those are amazing!

In terms of appearance, the green ones are the best. I agree with you on the capital variants though, the Yak feels rather plain.

[Thaago]

So... this is my first attempt in a while at drawing from scratch. This is the base outline and shading that I'll be putting details on top of. Help? (I'm not very good at this )





This is what I'm going for:

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The hull is composed of large flat plates. The bottom lighter section is a slightly raised tower with sloping sides. The front section is lower, has a flat top in the middle and sloped on the sides. The 'wings' are lower still, and have a horizontal crease about halfway through where it is sloped differently on each side. I'm not very happy with the wings

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[DestinyPlayer]

Working on a new ship right now. For now it looks something like that.