I think that ship looks good. Although the kitbashing is strong within this one, it has been done really well.
The only thing I don't like though is that... euh... thing in the lower middle. The lumps of metal. It really doesn't fit in.
Oh that, damm it, thats the one thing I cant work with
(I love how, IF I do get feedback, I cant comply
)
As you pointed out the sprite started as a kitbash and back then i wanted the central structure to be a..
bigger version of Paragons bridge(the central, white structure), so I think i just stacked them into this shape,
I could try to add a graphic in the middle of the structure, so it would have a steady ( shape, from top perspective,
as right now its basicly a gap \__/ in the middle of the bridge, or i could try to lighten the shadows in between it.
But, I simply still dont have the balls to go and make a central structure from scratch
I did some slight adjustments to the back of the ship, now I will move in the central part a bit.
Edit -Of course, its also possible to make the part that seems off to you disappear completly, but that makes the
ship look kinds "impotent"